| Reviews for Homecoming and More |
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  joe chapter 1 . 2/21/2012 when are you going to make the next chapter this is just amazing |
 WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 10/6/2011 Good story overall, the ending wasn't weak IMHO. |
| videogamer93 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 wow |
| Gerbilftw chapter 1 . 3/25/2010 Nah, the ending isn't weak at all! It would be nice with a sequel or second chapter when Misty is showing the pictures for everyone Where did Misty place Ash and May's hands? |
| Rickydabest chapter 1 . 3/23/2010 Yh it was good except for the ending. It was rushed. I love the part about May seducing Ash in his bed though. lol, very cute and funny. |
| eclispe2025 chapter 1 . 3/18/2010 great story but just so u know that grotle has already evolved into toterra (if u need reference consult ) but otherwise great |
| Genny35 chapter 1 . 3/14/2010 The story was great! And the cuddling part at the end was cute! Another Ash and May story and this was cute! |
| Kazama the shell bullet chapter 1 . 3/13/2010 Great chapter and thanks posting the story. kee p up the good job i can't wiat for your next story idea you will come up with. |
| Kamen Rider Fan 12 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010 That was a wicked ending! |
