Please fix the pov. Make or in third person or in his pov. It is confusing. This is btw not a flame.

This is sweet and adorable, yet really emotional. I really like it.

However, you keep switching between first- and third-person narration and you should watch that - it's confusing and detracts attention from the story.

completely adorable:)

so comforting

that was great loved it

nice one