Ouch. Poor Hatter

That's heart wrenching!

Oh Alice, you hurt Tarrant without even realizing it. Why can't she just stay in Wonderland, figure out that she loves Tarrant, not in a sister/brother way, and stay with him?

ojalá hubiera continuación.

Poor Tarrant! How terribly depressing to be relegated to sibling status when you feel more ardent feelings toward the other person.

awww, so sad but I still liked it

...Aw...That hurts...But oh, the way it's written...! So wonderfully Wonderlandish!

Poor Hatter...an' good ol' Mally and March...

A highly believeable scenario, after all. If Alice chooses to come and go, she'll never give herself time to develop more than affection of some kind. You really put a sinking feeling in my gut there with the ending - love it! I wish more people could use these emotions instead of the wild and violent madness when they crave emotional rollercoasterrides. Keen on holding lessons?

But as soon as that thought formed, another, more pleasanter one arose as well, that of them on the same bench, with the same table, now set with three porcelain cups; Alice's same hands gently questing, with a small girl child at their feet. One with wild strawberry blonde hair and an inquisitively mad smile-oh, but Alice was still speaking. - i loved this. the way you wrote it :) just reads so lovely.

but poor hatter. rejection in any form is hard.

Short but it was all that was need to display such a sweet tender moment, even if it wasn't exactly what Tarrant had wanted. Thanks again, lassie.

Awe cute poor hatter omg u did so well on describing hatter I hate how almost all aiw fanfics make him depressed it's starting to piss me off andvthe little girl was cute u did amazing

Lol. you have got to put a second chapter on this even though it is complete. I want to see her mother's reaction to seeing Tarrant.

POOR HATTER! HE WAS SO HOPEFUL:'(

:'( So sad... But very nicely written. I didn't see any mistakes, and everything made sense. This is such an amazing movie.

awww... poor hatter...