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This is a pretty great story. I love the plot and the main character and how Hidan isn't to different. Hidan's probably more in character in this story that in a lot of other one's I've read. So great job! :) I love the ending as well. Well honestly, I love the whole thing. Haha. Great work. :)

haifisch;
what a... cute little story. with focus on the little xD it was kinda hort, but sweet, i guess but i would have liked a bit more aiko/hidan action. that aside, really enjoy reading your stories
continue writing
kyoki no megami
maDAlexa

I really loved this story! X3 Although, I wish it was had more romantic scenes, or at least at the end. Either way, it was an amazing story!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute ;3

epic ;3

epic ;3

The Uchiha charm! My favorite scene in this story so far X3 Itachi could have taken over the world with only his smile

OMG IM SOOO HAPPY THAT HIDAN IS WITH AIKO! THIS STORY MAKES ME SOO HAPPY!

ahahahahahaha lmao i cant stop laughing... xDDDD

instead of kisame hidan became the spawn of the demon! xD

cuz well i though kisame's appearance is what kakuzu will use as a lie.. hahaha hidan need's to get purified alright

awesome lie kakuzu! xD

and itachi just seduced an old hag haha well not actualy seduce bnut yah xD i can just imagine the old woman swooning on the inside 8D

"Kakuzu is right; she shouldn't become attached to someone like me" That line made my heart hurt over and over again, as many times as I've read it (But it's like an itch really, on the inside that you just can't touch... I'm ticklish, so...)

I'm reviewing the story overall:

This is kind of a weird take, but I think weird fits the Akatsuki. I really like when characters contrast, and this story does a great job with that. I would've liked to seen a real love confession, from Hidan or Aiko, but I still liked the ending. I was going to point out how sometimes the POVs change randomly in the middle of the story, but I think you fixed that by the time I got around to reviewing this story. Great Story!

doom-chan&Dei-chan: *snickering in the background*

Hidan: Shut it! What d'you f**kers think is so f**king funny HUH!

Akira: Awweee...Hidan actually cares about someone...dat is sho qwoot! *pinches his cheeks while making baby noises and avoids scythe* haha

Hidan: -/- F**k you, alright b!tch...

Akira: hehehe while Hidan sulks I'd just like to congradulate u on an awesome story. I love it, it's very rare that I find fics that ONLY pair Hidan. And with a very good OC by the way. So very good work everything, hoping to see anymore writing styles from u soon.

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Yays, happy ending at long last~ Thank you for completing the fic!

Aww! This chapter was soo cute! I absolutely loved it. It kept me hooked the whole time, but I was kinda hopin to see a hidan confession. But either way it rocked. Cant wait for the next chapter!