| Reviews for Complex Desires |
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Estefania chapter 13 . 7/4 Oh jo jo. Se pone bueno. No se, el seshomaru del futuro actúa indiferente, podría haber dicho que la amaba a su madre y no solo que sería atendida. Sé que ella murió y no convivió con ella, pero tan malo fue que ella murió? Porque? Tardan más en matar a Naraku sin ella? Es por la joya se queda sin guardián? O simplemente después de su muerte se dio cuenta que cada vez pensaba más en ella asta que la amo? Si es así porque no decírselo a su madre y dejarla tranquila? Por eso estoy confundida. Espero de veras que aya amor entre ellos, que la marque y que no aparezca ninguna zorra intentando conquistarlo. El cachorro que sea puro. Y naraku lo termina ella, porque es la mejor ja ja ja. InuYasha es gilipollas, el puede zorrear con la muerta pero kagome no puede hacer lo mismo, porque el pobre se siente traicionado, vete a la mierda tío. Será posible la cara que tiene. Da mucho amor y pasión en cada esquina de ese castillo y alrededores ellos se lo merecen. Vuelve pronto. |
madmiko chapter 13 . 11/6/2019 I enjoyed their talk. I think it was very in-character for Kagome to tell him he isn't obligated to her because of the baby. And it seems very in-character for Sesshoumaru to insist he IS obligated and to take full responsibility for having decided to get her pregnant. I particularly loved the last line. I'm glad they are talking so freely to each other and that Kagome is aware of the potential for her to fall in love with him and let him know that she feels emotionally vulnerable and doesn't want to get hurt if he can't feel the same. Nice! It's been over a year since you updated, but I will be waiting and watching anxiously for the next chapter! |
madmiko chapter 12 . 11/6/2019 Sesshoumaru wants answers, naturally. |
madmiko chapter 10 . 11/6/2019 I'm glad her mother was so understanding and supportive. Interesting that future Sesshoumaru showed himself to her mother. Sad that he doesn't seem to love her, but I guess he hasn't fallen in love with her yet in the past and everything is still up in the air. though, if he didn't know yet that he would fall in love with her, why would he go to the trouble to save her in this way? (Time travel stuff can be SO confusing! LOL!) |
madmiko chapter 9 . 11/6/2019 So, Naraku just leaves? I think he could have wiped them out easily at that point. LOL! Now they still have to face him again. Looks like future Sesshoumaru changed the past for sure. At least, Kagome didn't die THAT day. Where's Kikyou? Love that Miroku pointed out Inuyasha's hypocrisy to him if he is indeed actually sleeping Kikyou. Ick! How did Kagome run to well so fast? I thought they had been traveling for two or three days. Glad Sesshoumaru finally acknowledges to himself that what she said HAD to be true. |
madmiko chapter 8 . 11/6/2019 LOL! So, they're having this big discussion, right in the face of their greatest enemy. And then Sesshoumaru denies the baby is his and walks away, leaving her and the baby vulnerable. He just lost out on "Father of the Year." |
madmiko chapter 7 . 11/6/2019 That. Was. Awesome! I really loved all the reactions to her scent and the fact that it revealed she was pregnant with Sesshoumaru's child. His reaction was truly priceless. But they still have to defeat Naraku. LOL! |
madmiko chapter 6 . 11/6/2019 Hmmm. Why would Kagome be wearing a school shirt if she's almost twenty? Sesshoumaru heard her say to herself that she's going to die. If she could tell the others were running after a puppet, while the real Naraku was there, why didn't she tell them? And so Sesshoumaru is the only one to realize Naraku lured the rest of them away from Kagome. Can't wait to see the reaction to her releasing her scent. |
madmiko chapter 5 . 11/6/2019 So, the Sesshoumaru in the past thinks her fear and nervousness is unusual for her. In their conversation about fear, I cannot tell which one of them is saying what. Is Sesshoumaru doing all the talking? She's finally wondering/worrying if she's going to die. Of course, I would think ALL of them might be having thoughts like that, knowing the final battle is upon them. |
madmiko chapter 4 . 11/6/2019 I'm surprised she is only focusing on the fact that she slept with Sesshoumaru in the future and not on the fact that she is about to die, if what he told her is true. And now Sesshoumaru is there, apparently joining up with them to face Naraku. Interesting that he knows Naraku is near when no one else does. |
madmiko chapter 3 . 11/6/2019 Very interesting that Kikyou called her on hiding her scent. And that she and Inuyasha both pohh-poohed her when she said she had a bad feeling about Naraku. Great job with her thoughts about Inuyasha and Kikyou and letting go. At least Sesshoumaru helped her a bit with that situation, even if that wasn't his intention. She's sad, but will be better off in the long run. I'm glad Inuyasha still met her at the well and at least gave her a ride to meet with the others. He should be feeling very conflicted having both mikos arouund all the time. |
madmiko chapter 2 . 11/6/2019 "He could have told her, but that was not his style." Nice! Seems very in-character. But he told her she dies when they fight Naraku. That knowledge alone would probably change the way she fights the battle. So, did he just not want her to die without ever knowing passion? So many questions! |
madmiko chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 Very, very intriguing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2019 Wish you still continued stories ! You have alot of good ones that need endings.. |
shaina chapter 13 . 10/3/2019 I absolutely love this story! I cant wait for more updates. please update soon. your writing is awesome. |