Loved the story and the ending was sweet, but there are so many questions. Like, what about Kurama in the future? Yoko still becomes housed in Shuichi, so how does that happen and where is Kagome and their kid in all this. Honestly, the answers to all the questions raised of what happened between them settling down after the defeat of Naraku to Kagome coming on to Kurama at the movie theater would be enough to write a sequel, wink wink. But regardless, I did immensely enjoy the story.

Plot twist kagome is type A and youko is type B her blood clots and she dies anyway lol

I only have ONE major complaint. What happened to them in the future? ! ? ! You brought future Kurama into the story, thus showing that he does still end up killed/almost killed, and then became Shuichi, so what happened to Kagome (and the rest of their family) ? ! ? ! O.O
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Also, what happened with Kurama and the others after they learned about Kagome? ! ? ! O.O
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Other than that, I LOVED this story! ! ! ! OXD

Um, a few things.
1 - By the time they reached the final battle, Sesshomaru had BOTH his arms, and a new, very powerful sword.
2 - By the time they reached the final battle, Kagome had a VERY special long bow that allowed her to shoot her arrows at enemies that had someone between her and them, without shooting the person between them.
3 - Engagement and Wedding rings go on the LEFT hand, not the right hand.
4 - Um, shouldn't they have at least made SURE everyone else was okay BEFORE they mated?
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Don't get me wrong, this is an AWESOME story, and I majorly LOVE this story, but I'm just pointing out a few things.

I found an "Alexis" in Chapter 3. It is located toward the end of the chapter in the paragraph that says. "The same smirk still plastered on is face, Youko gracefully sat near the fire he had made for dinner and served himself. Alexis trotted over to sit next to him. Feeling eye son him, Youko slowly turned his attention to his niece, who was smirking up at him." _

You missed an alexis in the 15th paragraph at the end.

I love this fic it was very good and well thought out and some parts were just funny. the only thing that bothered me was the part were her wish was selfish. it was selfish because she wants those she cared about to be happy, but at the same time it was selfless because she was willing to face the punishment for someone else's happiness.

I loved this but I keep thinking something bad must have happened since in the future he wasn't with Kagome. but then I don't know Yu Yu Hakusho so maybe things turned out ok. I hope Kagome managed to live to see her family, but for some reason, I am thinking she didn't. I am glad that they were able to raise Shippou and um, Taya.

You have Alexis written in the paragraph that has The same smirk still plastered on his face,... and can I say oH boy LOL at the bet Taya made. looking forward to more.

Hi! Love the story so far! Just wanted to let you know you missed an Alexis here in chapter 3, right after the scene with Youko, Kagome and the apple.

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Ummm if this is the case. What happened to Kagome? Future Kag's lived with Youko. Youko died? Where did Kagome go in all this?

Here's a better example of what I was trying to say:
Putting her now clean dishes aside, she turned a mischief smile in his direction.
Should be mischievous

I didn't know you could hunt, but where did you find the eggs?" Youko asked curiously as he finished his meal.
But should be and

So pure that she accepted him for whom he was? Whom should be who

Also you missed one again:
Once they were finished with their bath, Kagome wrapped herself in an expensive looking silk robe that Alexis Taya her.
Alexis should be removed and after Taya insert handed.
I portions this is the only chapter I'll do this on. I just wanted you to see what I was taking about.

Chapter three you missed one:
The same smirk still plastered on his face, Youko gracefully sat near the fire he had made for dinner and served himself. Alexis trotted over to sit next to him. Feeling eyes on him, Youko slowly turned his attention to his niece, who was smirking up at him.

Lovely