This was gorgeous, hilarious and utterly amazing :) great story. I was excited for another chapter but there wasn't one haha. Ahh well it's a brilliant story, well done :)

Love it, yes sex. For the first time can be werid

How... realistic.

that was wonderful... it gets sort of boring when every story has the first time being miraculous. a lovely change of pace :)

hahaha excellent story! Keep up the good work

Hello-

This is a very nice little story. I thought it was very cute. Just one thing that I would do (because i am the grammar and punctuation nazi) is put in hyphens in certain places. The one that I remember off the top of my head is at the end, where you said "Although the food would be delicious, Molly Weasley was most adept in the kitchen;..." It would make more sense, grammatically speaking to write "Although the food would be delicious - Molly Weasley was most adept in the kitchen - " and then continue on with your sentence. That way the reader gets the small tidbit of information and there is not a need for the semi-colon.

Really, very well done though!

That was really good and sweet! I really really liked it. It's so hard to find good stories nowadays! Almost everything is just crap... anyways your story was very nice.

I'll read more from you :)

great work! really funny!

"Did you...you know." "I don't think so." Oh my god. Hilarious!

"We can see someone about it..." So typical Hermione. I can't stop laughing!

Hahaha. No wonder he went to talk to Harry about it, if she's all "erectile disfunction" and "go see someone" after one soft-on.

Funny stuff.

Also good to see some first time sex not being mind-blowing, for a change ... but not in such a way that makes either of them look like losers.