I really hope you didn't abandon this story (and in extension the other ones) ,seeing as we're gonna have some pretty crappy 4-8 years and good fan fiction always makes one feel better:)

Cool story so far.

Only two problems with this:
1) Beach-Head may be a Sergeant Major, but despite what the Wiki sites claim, Duke, not BeachHead was the Command Sergeant Major of the Team. This is shown by the fact that Duke was Beach's superior. Duke was only refered to as the First Sergeant initially cause he came in when the team was still close to a company in scale. By this point, it reads as if the Joe team has reached its nearly Brigade to Division size.

2) Beach is really going to admit to violating orders to his CO and get his own rear in trouble.

Awesome story. I like reading about the reaction the joes have to stormshadow working with them

I love it so far, please update soon.

Loving this story to hell and back ! Waiting for some Storm angst ! Please update soon !

this story is awesome like the rest. sad to see it remains incomplete :(

great work providing thought processes of various Joes in relation to Storm Shadow

love it!

I love your story, please update soon.

Ah, I'm very disappointed that this would probably never get finished; nonetheless, cheers for that 11 amazing chapters!

I loved Tommy he's just got the right spunk, sarcasm and laid-back annoying and livable attitude. I loved how the story progresses from different views (imagine if I had to get stuck with Scarlett's narration for all the chapters *shudders). Most if all, I adore the bro fluff between Snake and Storm. God I wish they's just stay on the same side ugh

Anyway, thank you for that 11 part goodness!

OMG! I love it. It would be great if you continue it!

Is the next one going to have the recon work or the battle after the recon?

You should update this on June 7. Not only would it be exactly one year since the last update, it would also be my birthday! XD

Excellent stories with the Joes you've written. In the middle of switching sides and just finished Vendetta, and have thoroughly enjoyed them.

One note I have though - Beach Head is not the Command Sergeant Major of the GI Joe team. Yes, by the end of GI Joe, he is an E9 but was not placed in the CSM slot. Duke held that all the way through. However, his infamy for PT in the comics you capture spot on. However, no one mentions his lack of personal hygiene in your stories. To quote his source book file "He sees no need for things like deodorant, which might literally be a dead giveaway were he dropped into a jungle war zone at a moment's notice."

What I have especially loved is the borderline insanity of my favorite Ninjas. Been reading or watching GI Joe for years (first issue I owned and the first comic I ever bought was issue # 21 of the Marvel Comics run AKA the Silent Issue). Even went so far as to recreate each version of Snake Eyes costumes from mid High School through college for Halloween. Nice to see him and Storm SHadow getting the treatment they merit.

Sincerely,

Daniel J Haire

Another amazing fanfic about ninjas. It just doesn't get any better than that.

Yippie! New chapter! My favorite are the last two lines: Sums up Beach's philosophy. Post more soon please!

sweet

hurry update!