...Wow, you just did something weird. You made me feel bad for Amy and like a Sonic story with Amy in it. That, has never happened before in my entire LIFE! I mean it, Sonamy fics make me cringe and I haven't found a good one yet. But this, this was something else.

While I don't see this backstory working for SATAM, this actually would work for the games. This helps to add something to the universe, and not just the romance angle. We have a reason for Sonic being a hero, as now he sees every person he saves as his sister. This also helps Amy, turning her away from being a stalker character and more 'human' to coin a phrase.

The spelling was good, as was the grammar and pacing. Though the character was little, I could see the development of something great here and something that I could build if I wanted.

Ohhhhhh, that story was so sad! Could you please write another chapter for this? It's so sad, but so GOOD!
I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT!

This was very sad :c
Great story!

The story is a long and detailed explanation.

I'm not a fan of such explanations, considering the theory effectively turns canon characters into OCs. Was it possible to avoid that? It would have been a challenge, but we get to work with the text we have.

I liked the aesthetic feel of this piece as well as the sequencing. Normally, POV shifts would make me frown, but you've done what was necessary without disrupting concentration. There was a fluid transition from the tree to what looked like a dream state. As such, narrative makes for a cute read.

Dialogue is child-friendly with a solid parental part. I didn't like the cliched character death speech. For a story rated T, a lot of the material was blanked out. It's done in an idealistic fashion rather than besmirched by grim reality. This is one of those K plus stories that have a higher rating due to a single event.

The ending wasn't too satisfying. Sonic acted normally, but it looks unfinished. I mean, what now? It's impossible to stuff a happy ending there, so there should be a conclusive one. Surely, Amy would have to do some heavy thinking, with Sonic running off. An exchange looks fitting: Sonic leaves and Amy takes his place by the tree.

A well done theory. It has your personal touch, and what was put in place belongs there. My personal preference would have included a tweak or two, but that's the beauty of speculation about Sonic. Possibilities are truly unlimited.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

But Sonic was named after his grandfather, Sir Charles. Do not reply to my message.

Whoa I've never seen this kind of explanation for Sonic avoiding Amy! Poor Sonic... There should totally be a sequel with Sonic's reaction!

Wow, this is really different. And you know what? :) I really like it! Keep up the awesome writing job!

I am going to report this story! Because I have a big fat jiggly, Brazilian butt and I cannot find a better way to express it! I haven't had hot lesbian sex with my lover jewel because my biiiiigggg butt gets in the way! Please flame my forum. Critics United. Chas Aegis

I could write a BETTER story than this. Read some of MY stories... Oh wait, I blocked you from doing so! *Laughs Evilly*

Nothing here to say but good job, dude. Everything was pretty crisp and you gave a clear picture of what was going on. Story had a lot of heart, and it's something I like to see.

Keep writing and good luck.

Poor Sonic... This is probably the most plausible reason Sonic would avoid Amy.

Sad, but pretty awesome!

Happy Writing and God Bless,

Jeremy Lannigan

Thank you so much. I read this after I got in a fight with my younger brother and I was really feeling down. Reading about siblings relationships like Sonic's in this is really helping me feel better. BTW, I also like your, 'Sonic United' story.

nice story please tell me your going to add a second chapter

NOOOOOOOOO! Please just write a itty-bitty-teeny-tiny-little bit more? I WANNA KNOW HIS REACTION! ... please? _

What a great concept! Would've enjoyed seeing Sonic's reaction, but part of me likes the ambiguity.

Really, I had never considered Sonic's past and an Amy-look-a-like.

Kudos!