Ehh seen better but still it was good u should watch To Love-Ru but not on youtube and once ur finished with that try To Love-Ru Darkness only 1 episode for now but its a good series darkness is better than season 1
Well my point is u should try and make a crossover story with To Love-Ru trust me to Love-Ru complaments Zidane and Amarant perfectly.

That was fantastic! You just blew me away! Zidane X Riiko gets 6000 big stars! (I freakin' mean it)

This story was awesome, and I think you kept Zidane in character pretty well. I'm actually playing IX right now (for the millionth time), so next time I turn on my PS2, i'll have this story running through my head. XD I wish you would make a full story from this; it could get rather interesting - however, it's fine the way it is, either way :) Great job!

Whistles. That was hot. XD Your OC is very likeable and makes a good pairing with a cute thief with a lovely monkey tail. Perhaps you could have made more use of his tail in the sex scene? Great first lemon, by the way. XD

KYA! I'm so happy right now w This is the best birthday present evers! Thank you so much Kit

AH! I LOVE ZIDANE!XD

Riiko is cute! Something about her is so adorable!XD

Great story!

I don't know anything about FFIX but I do know who Zidane is, I think he was pretty in character. Hyper active like always.

haha

Lemon was good for a first one. better then my first one.

See for yourself: /s/4662460/1/Waiting