So... There is a claim of a sequel here... From over 2 years ago... hm... Well.. Please update soon?

I know it's been a long time since you've updated this story, but I'm still adding this to my favorites and following it in hopes that you'll complete it some day. I just started my own Brosca play through and was like, hey I wonder if there are any fanfics! Even fit here aren't many, I'm still glad to see quality ones. You did a wonderful job with their characterizations. I hope to see an alert from you sometime.

excellent story - looking forward to the next chapter :)

I would like to thank you for giving me something to read during my dull and dry government class.

I actually appreciate and enjoy the flashbacks concerning the battle of Ostagar. I found them much more interesting and creative compared to others who rewrote the entire battle.

Love this story! Don't know if you're even on this profile anymore but it's nice to see something completely different than the usual elf or mage zevran pairing. Your character is relatable, fun and fractured. The relationship between the two is believable. I don't know if you'll finish this story or even the sequel but you kept my eyes glued to the screen.

I'm so tense waiting for the next chapter. I'm a little confused as to what actually happened with Zevran, but I hope that will be explained fully elsewhere.

Thank you for an amazing story. I love it.

I really enjoyed this. I started reading here because I was looking for an insider's guide to Orz for part of my own FF without the tears and your story more than supplied that. Lyebread, mosscake, the heat... All useful stuff.

What did I think about Lina? Loved her, did some background reading on the noble hunters so it was good to meet one in person. Also enjoyed her verbal tussling with her ex Missa.

Only prob chapter was a bit long to read on screen but don't take that as a criticism, I just have old eyes.

Very impressed, I see your high rep is more than deserved.

I'm hoping she finally punchers her mother in the mouth lol

poor girl has too many people trying to give her advice

as a person who is claustrophobic, that was fucking creepy...

that ending was so sad and yet so beautiful

poor Zev, she's got him so messed up lol

Zev was only trying to help

I wonder if Zev is going to try to follow her

poor girl