I'm not usually a fan of a lot of fluff in Kyman stories, I enjoy the anger and hate between those two more. But when kyle said those last tender words "I love you Eric Cartman"..wow I was just really touched at that beautiful moment. And what he said about his eyes was sweet too. Very good oneshot! :)

beautiful..

Okay hold the phone. You watch south park, so you must be older than 8. You listen to Miley Cyrus, which means you can't be older than 15, I'm estimating you're either a brain dead teenager, or adult with the music taste of a twelve year old pubescent girl, or you ARE a twelve year old pubescent girl. Either way, horrible song considering south park, y'know MOCKED Miley Cyrus in a pretty recent episode. Horrible person. Horrible song. Miley Cyrus is a whore. Matt and Trey would laugh at you.

this is really cute and really good except for the fact i fuckin HATE miley cyrus! lmao but that's just me

D'aw, that was so cute, Emerald! I'm sorry I didn't read it sooner... XP But I loved it! Even if you don't continue it, you should write more Kyman in general. Everyone loves Kyman! But seriously, great story. X3

this story is really cute so keep writing kyman fics! XD

Oh I love that song! xD It was really good, so cuute x3 Ky was adorable!

Amazing, dude ;D There's really nothing I can say!

*loud fan girl squeal* OUHOIEHOFUEHEIHOIEHOUIHCR! SO! FUCKING! CUTE! NYAH! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! xD

Oh my gosh, that was so cute! I'm being totally honest here. Kyle was just utterly adorable. I love it when he's clueless about his feelings.

I thought it was great. In fact, I wouldn't mind seeing it continued. I mean, I know it's a one-shot and all, but maybe you could do another version with Cartman's thoughts? XD I dunno, maybe I'm just too into showing both sides. Still, I wouldn't mind seeing this go further. Especially if you get them together. ;D

Awesome job!

-Soul

-nosebleeds- -faints- -dies- -reborns- XD

all i can say is...this is amazing. i really love this. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

-tsk-! HOW KEWT! xD

i really wanna finish my kayden story, but be DAMN the thing isn't letting me write! ._.

what do you use? :P

THIS STORY WAS CUTE! xD

Aw you left us hanging - this really needs to be continued to answer all the unanswered questions:

- Will Kyle tell Eric how he feels?

- Will Eric feel the same?

- How did Eric Hurt his leg?

Seriously though - it's nice to read a story where Kyle and Eric are adults, rather that teenagers, for a change.