wooooow. so dark yet so awesome

I felt like crying at the end; this was so bittersweet. Loved the concept of Fai using Kurogane, and really only wanting to hurt himself.
I imagine Fai's reaction at the end to be one of shock.. maybe tears.
Loved this piece. very powerful.

great one! :)

cute,kinda sad for didn't read it sooner
love how you made kurogane thought he used fai and fai used him
when I first read it I very confuse(I not English speaker sr) but now when I read it again and understand,I think it lovely,plz write more about some thing like this

...I've never fallen in love with a oneshot before... Seriously, haha, I absolutely love this. It's so beautifully written. Definitely off to raid the rest of your stories :)

Kavbj

I loved it! :D These are my favorite kids of stories :) When there's a little bit of angst but the end isn't horribly sad. You also caught Fai's character perfectly! That's something not many people can do :)

Job well done!

good would love longer

I hope Fai was willing to accept Kurogane loving him! He almost seems like he could be the type to reject it...which would be sad! D: But why did Kurogane change his mind so abruptly once they changed worlds? He was so disgusted by the idea at first that it didn't really make sense to me. So I was hoping you might have an explaination for me...I did like the story though! Words aren't always the best communication! :D

Aaaaw Kuro-rin!

What I love about this one is that I could clearly see the different feelings Kurogane felt for Fai at different times.

My favorite is when he realizes Fai was manipulating him. Making him kind of a bad person even though he wasnt. The way you wrote it made Fai seem like an obstacle, almist an enemy in Kurogane's eyes. But then soon he was totally in love with him. It was just beautiful really.

Beautiful.

-eyes shimmer- Gorgeous, so gorgeous, I loved the way it played out, the way each sentence was carefully arranged so it built up and then pulled in. And the way it ended with a lack of words that said so much more than talking ever had. -loves- It makes me feel doki doki.

your a really great writer, and i simply love your ideas and the way you represent these characters. great work!

I really liked it :)