*laughs!* I'd wonder that Ed could even taste the milk with the coffee flavor. As a fellow milk hater, I find it at least easy to disguise. But, maybe it's just the idea of it. Still, it was sweet of him to drink it anyway. And, Al's quiet amusement is hilarious.

LOL love conquers all xD Good for Ed, broadening his horizons and all c:

Wow, your descriptions here are gorgeous. A library as a hushed afternoon forest is a beautiful idea.

This is beautiful.

Delighted to see another addition to your writings in FMA - I love the description of the library!

Thank you so much for still writing for FMA'03 universe!

Keep up the MARVELLOUS work!
And please write more!

I don't really like much from first person pov but this was an interesting little snippet.

Aw! So sweet and so very Al. I know I've mentioned how much I love how you write brotherly moments, but can I say it again?

Beautiful one

Al is such a good boy. I appreciate this piece a lot. He protected brother from the rain and then got to take pleasure in the sound of rain hitting his armor.

"Al looked up to the sky with a contented inner smile", what a gorgeous choice of words. In some way I'm not able to explaining nor truly understand, reading Alphonse always gives me a sense of deep peace. And you sure write him beautifully every time.

I'm glad to read something yours again. As always, thank you for this.

Awwwwwwwww, this is adorable!

This was glorious. I adore Alphonse' s special even-keel way of showing disapproval.

*cackles* Al informing Ed of exactly what he just did is priceless.

Red is Ed's favorite color.