Ow I feel physical pain everytime I watch Grace die

Wonderful story! I love the dialogue between Grace and Eytukan. D

Nice story, though I share True Colours' thought, I don't think that the spirit of those that have died reside with Eywa as conscious souls that can think and have conversations and make decisions as when they were alive. That doesn't make sense to me. But I did enjoy reading this touching story.

Adorable. Well written, flawless grammar, good punctuation, choice of words, character developement and even a bit of humour. Loved it all! :D

Izzyx

Nice story I'm glad to see that someone finaly thought Grace would have some kind of admirer.

At the moment that is all I can think of to say accept that I realy like this idea and keep writing.

Oel ngati kame

The emotion in this story is amazingly powerful. I could read this over and over again, and never feel any less emotions. I salute you!

You keep coming up with these great stories. Loved the interaction between Grace, and Eytu'kan.

Great story, and great idea. I love everything you write, that is amazing! Thank you for yet another piece of excellent writing.

Grace and Eytukan together in Eywa? That's a new one. I'm not totally convinced about your idea to make them fully conscious and still themselves - it was veering towards comedy, and I'm not sure if that was what you intended.

Still, on the whole I liked your idea. The story you told, of this warrior taking his younger brother to school and slowly growing in love and respect for Grace, was very moving and interesting. I think that these OCs of yours and the scenario you put them in might bear more developement, in a short chapter fic. It was also interesting to hear your take on the scene where Neytiri's older sister was killed, as this was only touched on in the script.

True

Just another great story, and as I have said before you are definately one of my favorite authors on here.

But... but... aw c'mon... Teekans' story can't be "complete"?... can it? Well, either way, I thought that it was cool that Grace had a secret admierer. I just wonder what Eywa has in store for him.

Also the "land of the dead" POV was interesting as well. It makes me wonder if Eywa absorbes all life enery and memories from those that die on her world. If so, then she should aquire a large amount of knowlage from the mercenaries that were killed and Quarich. Hm Was that a plot bunnie that went hopping by.

Keep up the great work... and I'm watching for the next "Clouds" installment. :)