WELL THIS WAS BORING AND NO WERE NEAR GOOD.

Don't make lemonade. Get mad! I don't wanna see your damn lemons! Make life rue the day it thought it could give Cave Johnson lemons! Do you know who I am?! I'm the man that's going to burn your house down! I'm gonna get my engineers to invent a combustible lemon that BURNS YOUR HOUSE DOWN!

Im dont want to give my name. Add more to this it is really great and makes a great starter for a story.

Awsome ending, love the description of the diamond cave. I have three 200 page books which are connected together about Spyro and Cynder, how do I get them published on this websight?

ok THIS STORIE IS STUPID haga i made u cry like a bbby mwhahahshshssgggffff PEACE

rainbow boy and LU quit being such a shit to other people works..(For the blood of the south)...its M rated for a reason.

Jamster great job...don't listen to rainnbow and LU.

And put the lemon back in so I can read it. This storry was gret.

Even without the lemon, it's still a wonderful story! Don't stop writing them!

To you fags going on about the LU

Go to the Pokemon and Sonic the Hedgehog sections of this site. You will literally find hundreds of explicit storys with sex scenes and worse stuff. If the FanFiction Admins were to remove this story but completly ignore those other stories, Jamester0091 has FULL RIGHT to sue this damn site to the ground. It is freedom of speech so you little mother fuckers SHUT THE FUCK UP AND LET HIM WRITE!

LU...you are a stupid bitch. shut the hell up and let the dude right. if you dont like it, then dont read or review. personally i thought this was a good story. and yeah...FF really doesnt care what people write, as long as its the right rating. there r stories much more explicit than this one, gonna flame all them too?

hey, keep up the good stories, i really like your ballad 2, this and that are awsome!

Honestly, the LU is just a bunch of bullshit. As cordial as they try to make themselves seem, their pre-pubescent legacy doesn't even go past their computer chairs. They try too hard to act like they give a shit about the site rules.

Explicit sexual content is not allowed on the domain as it should properly be rated NC-17 or MA. NC-17/MA is not allowed on-site and the rating is presented in the Guidelines for reference. Publish this work on Adult FF if you are of the proper age.

Until then, I'll report this now, judging by Aqua's review being placed already.

Also, I recommend refraining from use of terms such as the below quote in the story. It only jogs the readers' attention away and interrupts flow.

""Rlly?" Spyro said through her paw."

I advise you remove the MA content before the site admin perform the duty for you, potentially resulting in a ban from the domain.

~SpyroXCynderMyLove~

~Literate Union~LU~

~Order of the Concritters~

i love it

spyroxcynder of all time

sexy and steamy are you gonna write a sequel to it

Explicit sexual content is prohibited under the current site guidelines, which you agreed to adhere to when you first published this story. If you would like for your story to not be reported, please either remove the content in question or move this story to another site that allows such content.

And that's all I have to say about that. Good day to you.

Aquaman52

~LU~

ha ha ha i get it WHEN LIFE HANDS YOU LEMONS

u sir r a genius

keep writing