awesome hope to see a new chapter up soon

I was thrilled to see that you're still working on this. Kel/Nealan romance doesn't really do anything for me but you write adult Kel brilliantly - of all Pierce's characters Kel was always the one I most wanted to see as an accomplished, settled adult, and you capture that here extremely well.

I love Neal!

loved it. Neal and kel are my favorite couple :)

This is a great story :)

hmm... interesting.

i like the story so far and want to see what you do next. update soon!

I love this chapter. Especially their language. I can't wait for their sparring session :)

that is good. update soon please.

Long time no chapter. Well, it was short but sweet. I'm interested in seeing how Akemi ends up.

This is very good and I plan to keep up with it. So it's been five years since she and Neal have seen each other which is a shame and their last meeting wasn't exactly a happy one. Also a note. The cousins of the Queenscove family that you've been calling Hawryse is actually spelled Haryse. I looked it up to double check the spelling since I know it didn't have a W in there. I'm also a big Beka fan so that's another reason I knew what family you were trying to refer to.

Ack, I fell behind on this story and I had to catch up. But this story is excellent and I've really been enjoying it. The character development has been superbly done and the writing is fantastic. I'm starting to really enjoy this story; things are getting interesting. In this chapter, Kel's conversation with Raoul was thought-provoking and intriguing. Please update soon!

great chapter :D

another night owl :P

great chapter :)

I quote my friend

- "Good question. Next Question please!"