*some things in the musical clearer, like how Elphaba asks where Fiyero is in the train station scene and in the wizard's chamber when he says 'well it was'.

sorry I accidentally clicked the send button before I was done writing O.o

awww this is so sweet! It actually makes some things

But they don't :/

Now I understand why Fiyero says, "Well, it was" when Glinda says, "The two of you behind my back" and Elphaba says, "No it wasn't like that"

OMG! i read the "do you think i want to be this way? do you think i want to care this little?" part, and i was like "the scene with the lion cub. "why is it that every time i see you your causing some sort of commotion"

"i don't cause commotions, i am one"

"thats for sure"

"what? you think i want to care this much? you think i want to be this way?"

I love this story, it's so sweet, and it seems realistic unlike some other wickedfic writers that I have read. I love all of the quotes, and the fact that there isn't really anything that you need to have read the book to understand, i am only at the beginning of the book, so I find that a good thing.

Plenty of time? Not so. Thats sad! Fiyero had a DEPRESSING childhood.

aww how cute 3 loved it :P you should continue!

Cute :)

Is your Caps Lock key okay? You're missing a lot of capitals.

Other than that, not bad.

Cute. I like how they open up to each other. :-)

It was really sweet.. :)

Aw...that was so cute.

**ShortieJ**

AW! Great story Dee!

(sorry i took so long to review)

:P x

Aww 3

This was lovely and the perfect distraction from my dull philosphy paper I'm currently working on.

You've made my inner Fiyeraba fangirl very happy :)

Loved it!

The kiss at the end especially was great, I liked that it wasn't full on and I like Fiyero saying he wanted Elphaba to feel something real, that made me go 'aw' and fall in love with him a bit more, lol.

That was absolutely brilliant :D Great work!