Loved this ! Can I make a request on a story?

great story... though not enough Snake and Scarlett for my personal taste ;)

but I still love a good ninja story :D

Sheer excellence!

*whistles* Go Storm Shadow. I forgot to do that last chapter.

Love this story.

Liking this already.

I've been reading through all your fics the past couple days and finally got off my butt to begin commenting. I really like the voice of all the characters and the banter between them here. I almost feel sorry for "eddie" he had the right idea for deal with ninja(sedate them) he just didn't follow through and keep the ninja sedated. Just as well though, Storm would never have heard the end of it, if Snake-eyes had to carry him out the prison.

Glad you read (some of them anyway; I don't know how many you went through) and enjoy, Spacev.

The whole point of this fic (and Escapism, and Clans) is to give the ninja a chance to shine. And...well...If you ever read the G.I. Joe comics, the ninja do pretty much operate in "god-mode" most of the time; the comics pretty much serve as an homage to the image of ninja in pop culture. I beat them up more than the comics do on occasion, actually.

And I shall never lay off the medics; I enjoy torturing them too much. The personalities of the adrenaline junkie Joes and the medics bouncing off one another is too much fun to write.

I have readed several of your stories and I think they are well written. It just seems that sometimes you are making the ninjas on the team allmost untouchable. Other than that I just want to say I have enjoy all of your stuff that I have read and I hope you keep writting. And please lay of the medics a bit.

Good show. I love how he took out the lights first... not only did it make sense tactically - especially for someone with radar ears, as Breaker put it -, it also terrified the guards, who I'm sure all deserved it as much as Edwin. It's also a nice way to make an entrance without actually revealing your position. Nice.

The banter with Snake Eyes was good too. Sweet of Snake Eyes to think of the earplugs, although I suspect if he HAD had to save him, he would only have given him the earplugs with a remark along the lines of "I also brought you some earplugs, to protect your delicate little ears after pulling them out of trouble along with the rest of you".

Thank you for that nice story. Very good one.

I really love it when Stormy freaks out everyone around him ;-). And you made a cute picture of the two of them comparing notes on getting out of situations and bickering over rescuing the other one. I still suppose he and Snake have a secret "Who's the biggest, baddest, scariest ninja" competition running between them.

oh boy

masacere is eminent

Oh wow, I can't wait to read about Storm Shadow's revenge :D

I loved the way he talked himself out of a prison cell (the foolish guard!), and the idea of a ninja wearing a bobbypin just made me laugh, I don't know why... but don't tell him that.

'Ninja first, soldier second' fits really well. All of the sarcastic comments were hilarious too :)

This gives a new meaning to crack fic. Not because it's ON crack, of course: it's just really, really addicting. Please keep it up!

Yeah, go Stormy go!

Guess a certain Crimson Guards commander will find himself a toy for a certain pissed of ninja soon. Shouldn't have mouthed off so much before.

Well, well, Tommy obviously uses everything that works, including playing soldier if necessary. Bad, bad Tommy ;-).

Love it so far, update please.

More running less talking. Ha. Expected a "shoo" motion to accompany that. Much fun action and adventure, easy to follow what's going on all the way through, but never bogs down with unneeded detailed descriptions. Excellant as always, and yes, no stealing all the kills. Ninja first, soldier second does describe StormShadow most excellantly. After all, SnakeEyes was soldier first, ninja next.. Storm is ninja born and bred and trained... then a soldier. Kudos, thanks for posting a new chapter!