this was really interesting to thinks of

You have just managed to take a type of character that I loathe, the Bane of Literature: the Mary Sue, and made me actually care and feel for their plight. You truly made me think and consider whole new possibilities. That, my friend, is the mark of a great writer. Much kudos to you!

This is pretty cool, and all your characters are really interesting.

Ok... So sadly I couldn't figure out what universe was Taty from? She was the captain of a star ship so... OMG Invader Zim? Seriously I was trying to figure this out the whole time and I think I just did because I remembered the fandoms you wrote for on your page.

Wow. I realy loved this. I'm happy for Ana and Taty. I hope that Leo will one day be promoted, her character was interesting. The world you created here is just so amazing. This story really sucked me in. And it was so well written. Thanks for the great read. Keep writing. By the way, I know feel bad for the OCs I've trashed throughout my time as a fanfiction writer. I think some of them are howling for revenage at this very moment... o.O LOL

My god, this actually made me sad... and guilty. Crap, I've got to go rewrite my last Mary-Sue story!

wow, that was certainly interesting to read. in the middle , iwas like, omfg, captain taty! i love the squeaky crew! good job!

I can't explain it, but this really struck me so I'll try. It made me feel a little bit sad. It was an interesting idea and well written, but its like you took something from me or gave me something I'm not sure I want to have.

Is it strange that I enjoyed it anyway? The whole experience?

Kamara

I love it! Must...use...plot...bunny...

Oh man, this was really interesting! I've made mary-sue's (i think) but never put them out into the world... Do they count? Like, if no one but myself have seen them? Or my friends?

-HBWD

I've always wondered what happened to all of them. I'm glad some are happy.

You really captured my imagination with this one. I enjoyed reading it.

This is great! I love that you created a universe just for Mary-sues. It sounds like you did a lot of writing before the Invader Zim universe, did you take them off the site, or were they never published?

I agree with the Mary-sues # 4 and 5 descriptions, Honestly who wants to read about a suped up pixie child with god like abilities and "awesome" personality.

Also, looks like you're doing some Star Trek fics, can't wait! :)

Being someone who has hopelessly created more than one Mary Sue despite knowing better... I can't help but like this story. I'm looking forward to where it might be heading. (And I keep thinking about how my own OC's would react to your world.)