Very cool. I like it a lot. You do a good job of giving the feeling of suspended reality, floating time, inexorably pressing onward, beating Sylar's ego down.

O_o That was probably one of the best fanfics on Sylar that I've read. No lie. Especially like this part:

"Tick.

He wasn't strong enough.

Tick.

He was never strong enough."

I really like the title, too. Just... wow. (Shivers) You did a brilliant job of writing for Sylar, for describing exactly how he felt when he was trapped there.

Keep writing!

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Sounds interesting! I really like your story; do we get another chapter soon?

This is really good. I love how he forgets almost everything except that he wants to be good. Great job!