I could not stop smiling throughout this fic. That was funny.

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Again, laughing! This is just so great. I am not wordful, but it was brilliant. So funny!

My favorite line: "I'm going to die and I'm only sixteen."

Hm it lacks something when taken away from the story. Does that tell you something?

One of your best I'd say

i love this... it made me smile like mad the whole time i was reading it! keep it up!

~Serindraxx~

haha good job I really like your stories, they make me laugh and they are cute XD

I loved this. Great story!

hahaha :) this is really good

I love your stories and I'll forgive you for slacking part only in the not writing enough stories/chapters though however I was very dissapointed with the fact that there was no...1kissing 2shirtless and very well describing James, same with Sirius and Remus(go intelligent and sane people!) although I do like them mad...cough Sirius cough ;) though no shirtless Peter I will say sorry no because technically in your stories Peter hasn't betrayed them yet when he gets to that age though in fanfiction land though I swear he's dead to me. Anyway back to what I was saying I will forgive you if you do me one itsey bitsey thing WRITE MORE stories of lily and James and the hilarious adventures of the maurders, if you do this though u absolutely HAVE to like I will die a HORRIBLE and PAINFUL death (not dramatic at all i know) thé longer story you were writing, the stag in the witchlight or something you said you wouldn't adbond it and it's almost at the end SO I MUST (sorry if I sound demanding or whiny I know your busy) READ THE REST plz finish it's so hilarious I was laughing so hard one time I was reading it in my bead curtasy of my iPod (my entre life by the way especially since it connects me to fanfiction, I love you iPod!) anyway I was laughing so hard that I was shaking and the shelves that are attached to my bed started to move all my junk (trust me there's alot of it my room probably resembles siriuses without the food and biting monsters) back to the story my wooden cd holder (which of course nond of my CDs are in) feel off and landed on my head yet even though it hurt I couldn't help laughing in the most ladylike way ever (of course) so loudly that everyone who was awake or a lightsleeper thought I was crazy ridiculous huh? (don't look at me like that I am not mad!..well not completely I hold on to my last shread of sanity, or at least I tell myself that) anyway please please Im begging you all my favourite books (minus HP of course aren't coming out till at least September! Like I'm dying to know if peeta will live and will the rebels overthrow the capital and will katniss kill present snow and who will she choose gale (sorry gale fans bo! he dosnt deserve a capital in his name nor katniss!) or PEETA whose way more awsome one he's hoteast I imagine him so) two he's an artist and she's a muscian well not exactly but she can sing beautifully three he understands her experience in the area four has loved her since he was like five six he's strong and that's hot and finally he can BAKE! I AM SO SORRY! I told u I was mad I forgot you might not even understand what I'm talking about if you've read the hunger games you'll understand if you haven't I'm really sorry for babbling and I really suggest you read them they're great it'll keep you octupied till the next Harry potter movie comes out another reason I need your stories to keep my madness contained till it's out me and my sister have decieded to show our madness by dressing up like hogwarts students we dream of being. Oh I just realised how long this is, if u read all this even through my crazy rants your one of my favourite authors! I love the short story on the whole lily going into the boys bathroom itc

was pure genus. I know I should probably stop talking now even though you are a bloody fantastic author but I justify it by not writing comments on all your stories sorry but I'm not sure how you get your comments so I like commenting on the newest one just in case. Please continue the story remember stag in the witchlight and don't forget short stories that satify my SHMGO (shirtless hot guy obbessttion) with my three favourite maurders Prongs, Padfoot and Moony sorry Peter but my heart is taken. Thanks for listening if only for part of this if you read the whole thong your as crazy as me but all the best people are soo don't forget keep writing!

I really like this one shot... short and funny. I love how mischievious and smooth sirius was (and im surprised he didnt blame the sneezing girl), and how james flings himself infront of lily to take the mashed potatoes for her! it kind of forshadows her saving harry, in a way.

That was very funny and clever!

:)elleyou

you're alive!

notice how i'm too much of a slacker to sign in, much less write a story.

anyway, that was excellent.

God, I laughed so hard at this. A pea lodged up his nose? LOL! I really do like it! Great Job!

I just love the James/Lilyness you write. You write them so well!

Anyway it's nice that you are back! Yay! I hope to read more... maybe 'Stag in the Wandlight'? *wink*

cheers: HW

That was cute :) And something I can totally imagine happening. Nice work, and glad you're still out there.

~Cupcake

Sequel? :)