A great story. Very well written.

I think this is good. This is a good story. Keep it up

That was so sad, it's was really good. I've tried to imagine what happens here so many times and this is better than anything I've ever thought of.

Hmm. It was pretty good...I like Grindelwald, but he seems too...apologetic. I like the part where he's in denial, but in canon he runs away, he isn't pushed out.

It'd be better if it were more chaotic and more about what Aberforth was feeling, but the last line was genius.

I would say that they didn't know which of the three killed her and that they weren't sure if it was really Gellert, but no, you said it in the summary, and this is your story, and it is really good. If I tried to write this scene, which i have many times, then it would give me cavities so big I'd stop eating chocolate...And anyway, it's just so easy to blame Grindelwald.

Ok, all in all, that was pretty good, and keep it up.

Bye.