| Reviews for Moments of Temptation |
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requirings chapter 1 . 8/16/2018 thanks! |
SereneMayhem chapter 1 . 8/12/2012 Aww... I love this! |
Windspiel chapter 1 . 9/3/2010 Oh, I like that! I'd like to read more with this pairing...don't you want to write another oneshot? greetings and hugs :D |
dex lucas chapter 1 . 8/8/2010 I like this pairing now :D I might start writing it. |
RavenEcho chapter 1 . 6/17/2010 I love the subtlety here... very well done. |
Amadea chapter 1 . 4/21/2010 This story just made my day! I have a soft spot for Percy/Oliver stories and you've written them just so perfectly. I love the set-up and the lighthearted tone of the story, and the fact that you've retained Percy's pretentious and sanctimonious traits while still rendering him lovable. Also, and I think we all know this, Oliver is hot. Everything about this fic felt right. Supremely enjoyable. So much to like about it. Please excuse the gushing. This review doesn't even properly convey my giddy reaction to the story. |
hydraspit chapter 1 . 3/30/2010 This was cute. I really enjoyed reading it. I like how it was subtle slash - ignorable if it is not what you want to read, but full of hints for those that want to see it. I also really enjoyed the split viewpoint. All in all, very well done. |
Jemennuie chapter 1 . 3/26/2010 I loved this! I like how indirectly Percy contributed to the detention, yet it was still there. The parallel between 'Oliver scrubbed. And scrubbed.' and 'Percy patrolled. And patrolled' was also great, and I like how even though both of the characters are flawed, they're both likable, and seeing them be so friendly with each other near the end made me quite happy. All in all, great job! |
Bad Mum chapter 1 . 3/7/2010 This pairing is my latest guilty pleasure! I really love the characterisation of Percy in this, and how you;ve made him a sympathetic character rather than just stiff and Perfect Prefect Percy. Oliver is good too, and their relationship is nicely understated. |
MyColdHeart chapter 1 . 2/24/2010 I'd be happy to review _ ~ I loved your FanFic and how well you got the both of them so well in character :D I need More :3 |
Selenehekate chapter 1 . 2/19/2010 I definitely believe that you got Percy and Oliver in character. Percy's characterization was flawless, and it made for a very entertaining read! Great job! |
lonely hands chapter 1 . 2/19/2010 I loved this so much :) I'm not much of a Percy fan, but you made him seem really cute 3 |
RoyalJamboree chapter 1 . 2/16/2010 Aww, Percy finally helping someone out. :) This is so sweet and tells a lot about Percy and Oliver(who were indeed in character). For whatever reason I loved the descriptions of Percy not knowing something or having not experienced it yet. The only issue I had was that when you switched point of view, it was a bit awkward. Anyways, I liked it a lot. :D ~Pyro |
abby245 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010 Um, wow. I absolutely loved this! You wrote Oliver and Percy perfectly. Great job! I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for writing it ) -Abby |
ThePandorica chapter 1 . 2/16/2010 I like this, very much. :) For someone who doesn't like slash (I would use the word 'detest', but for fear of being flamed.) :L - But this is nice! TRR |