this is super cute! I'm loving this au and hope you get the chance to finish it.

Perfection! Ugh! I enjoyed everything about this. Even though it's unfinished and I kill for a part 4 I still really like the ending of part 3.

WHY IS THIS UNFINISHED. WHY ISN'T THERE MORE. WHAT AM I GOING TO DO WITH MY LIFE AS I WONDER WHAT HAPPENS TO THESE TWO DISGUSTING ASSHOLES IN LOVE. I AM RUINED FOREVER.

this is beautiful and you're a homewrecker, jsyk. it's crazy to hope for a continuation after six years but nobody has ever faulted me for my optimism. at least, not yet.

Loving this so far!

I really hope you continue it!

I found you through a reference from another story fan of yours. Your stories are very good. Sometimes they ramble a little bit, but I love how you do the characterization. Very well done.

Sad...it looks like you vanished two years ago. Should I assume this story will never get finished? Too bad, it's a interesting concept you thought up.

You must be the first I read that actually came from Japan. It's always interesting to read about the actual traditions from the country this program came from.

Clarity

awwww man this is really good if only i didnt have to search for the uncut version this world be perfect. the link is not working...

God posting this means so much win. I thought insomnia was over forever and was forced to cry in a dark corner for my loss. You have my gratitude. FTW my friend FTW.

How I wished to have found this earlier! I really love your writing and your stories have been a pleasure to read. I hope you'll start updating again! I'm putting you on alert in case you upload more: wouldn't want to miss it! -

interesting

Eek, I haven't read a good fanfic in this fandom in what seems like ages. I really love the casual relationship you've got going between them. This is the kind of dynamic I like; neither of them are simpering romantics (at least not outrightly so) and they complement each other in the strangest of ways that, at second glance, is actually fitting.

Definitely looking forward to an update for this :)

...Here I am thinking that you could write romance novels. Sure, they wouldn't sell in Wal-Mart, because they're kinda homophobic, but you have a talent for making characters from a children's card game cartoon into real people.

Please think about it.

Wish you all the best!

Interesting. I love the way you write Jou and Seto. Wouldn't mind an update...just sayin'...

D/2

Amaaazing :) I didn't want it to end!

Wowww - I think that's how I started my last review, isn't it? How original! - anyway, I loved this chapter too. In fact, I am purposefully spreading this story out and reading a chapter a day, which is very, very difficult, let me tell you! I love everything about this story :) I wish I could say something really amazing about it, but its not really my way. I'm not that good at critiquing stories, just loving them. I excel at that XD but anyway this story, like the characters it was based on, is made to be loved. Fantastic work, dude :)

Wow...from beginning to end this is so well written. Soooo well written. I may not get the reference cookie ;) but this story was even better than a cookie, man. Hahaha. It was, tho