I hate this story why did you kill off the best character, write some better fics this one blows

*sobbing* that is so cute and sweet..and sad...

The plot of the story is amazing. Though I'm really sad Squall died... :(

I can see the improvement in later chapters, as the mistakes are only a little and the sentences make more sense.

Good job! :)

~Noone can predict the future, there are no guarantees~

Nagia Heartilly.

P.S. Squall is trapped in the griever ring as a guardian force, right?

Hey this story is good...I like the plot! :)

I'd suggest to read and make some corrections though as there are some letter and even whole words missing making it difficult to read and the readers have to imagine what you want to say at some parts because of that.

The plot is really good and interesting, so it's really a shame to be ruined by these little careless mistakes...

~Noone can predict the future, there are no guarantees~

Nagia Heartilly

Normally when it comes to things like this I cry when people die. Odly enough I didn't. Strangely I cried when he showed back up. Only a little. But then I cried at the end with the whole wind thing. I really lost it. Not that I havn't before but. Anywho it was an enjoyable read though your newer stuff is definiutly more readable. I couldn't understand some of your sentence and gramar structures, but besides that anoyance the story itself was prety good.

good story but to sad u made me tear up lol

Wow that was amazing *adds to fav. stories list* though now ive got to read another one where Squall and Rinoa live happily otherwise im going to be depressed all day hehe. Your story was so powerful that i actually felt the loss that Rinoa endured *especially towards the end*. I also nearly cried so well done for writing an excellent story.

Your discriptiveness really pushed the story along and a verry verry verry good, intersting plot also helped to make the story interesting. Your sence of humour was absolutely spot on also, i readilly laughed at the characters and their dialogues were very true to the original characters in the game.

Thankyou for an enjoyable 3 hours of reading and i hope to read some of your other work *more Squinoa's would be excellent (hints)*

Once again keep up the excellent work and congratulations on being a rare fanfiction writer that not only puts you right into the heart of the story but also moves you and makes you feel all of the emotions your characters feel. Sorry if the review was a bit formal but i like to give deserving writers a warm, fuzzy, acurate review so they can boast about how good they are lol :p.

I also want you to know i am serious in what i am saying and writing this review in slang wouldnt give the appropriate meaning. Well done and keep up the fantastic work *MORE SQUINOAS PLEASE*!

From Clare

A Squinoa Lover :D

Aw that was the cutest fic ever! I'm extremely depressed that you killed off Squall though. I guess it was sweet in that he can sorta...talk to Rinoa via the wind? In a way? Some sort of a connection? Anyway, realli original plot that had just the right amount of everything to it! Love, action, conflict, and more love...tee-hee.

Wow. That was a really good story! Good, but sad. *sniff* Your a good writer, just wish taht squall didnt have to die hehe ;D

SQUALL! NO.. He's dead... *cries* I enjoyed your story, but damn it was sad. It was really good though..

OMG

interesting.

well seifer the bad guy again. i don't want him to be a bad guy.

that was really very good. i just got clicked into all this final fantasy stuff but that was really good. i''m looking forward to the continued... please finish! :)

Great to see that ure still alive

Nice beginning to a new story or is a follow up from somtime?

U should also try to finish Guarded Terror. i really like ure stories so I really hope u update real soon

Oy!I just finished reading this..(My goodness.. how long have you finished this...) Anyway... Why kill Squall? T.T I know you like Seifer more than Squall tho..*pif* p Anyway.. Hey write another (easy say.. hard to do ne...) Ahahahah...