Cute chapter! Love how the texting comes off natural and not forced

lol, Renessme is fucking childish here :v after what all he had been done, she didn't even trust him :v good :v

lol Renessme is such a fucking childish here :v after whatj

I hate when aurhors say that since Jacob is a werewolf his children would be part werewolf. No, his kids would be human because the gene is activated because of vampires. If him and Nessie had kids they would be 1/4 vampire and all human. The vampire gene would cancel out the wolf gene because they are there to defend people from vampires, if it weren’t the case the kid would be in constant battle with himself because of these genetics. ️

Hands on me and undeniable are the best fanfictions forever and ever. It deserves 10k reviews. Those who didn't read it yet go and do it NOW!

Oh, also, just forgot. You never explained why she wasn't a full strength hybrid. Unless, of course, you were implying that it was because she abstained from blood when she confessed to Jake about the human food and the once every 3 months thing.

~Drunk

If I reviewed this, that really sucks, because I just reread it and want to review again.

I love this fic so much. It's almost the perfect AU to the baseline Twilight ending.

A few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, a little bit of a rushed finish with Edward's fury, and just a bit of disbelief leave this story at a solid 8.5 to 9 out of 10.

Half hoping for a sequel.

~Drunk

Loved this story! I wish I read it when you first published it so I could've left you a review too, but this will hopefully be good enough! I love how you portrayed Jacob in this story, it really grabbed my attention! Anywho thank you for taking the time out of your busy life to write this!

Hey!
I love your story! I love it so much, I actually just read it for the third time. I simply think the idea of them meeting without knowing about another is great. Sadly I couldn't find other stories that used a similar approach.
Thanks for your amazing writing!

Renesmee is half vampire she could have killed both of them without lifting a finger plus the gun wouldn't have hurt her the only thing that can kill her is either another vampire or a werewolf

Best story ever tbh

this was a fantastic read thank you for sharing this funny , captivating gem

This was honestly the best story ever ...

Huh...well the pack is mean... why so much hate? She fell in love with Edward as the pack fall in love with their imprints. Simple as that.

Great story, a thoroughly enjoyable read.