. . .
-blows up in a pink cloud of confetti and warm fuzzy feelings-

That was a sweet little story. Good thing for both Kanji and Naoto that they have Ms. Cupid herself, Rise Kujikawa, to help all three of them get what they want. And hell, they're all very, very, lucky. ;)

"Rise shrugs and twirls the straw in her soda. "Hey, they're not gonna get anywhere without me."

Thats so true. Okay, now you got me really liking this pairing. very much. ;)

i actually don't mind this trinity thing so much, cause when you look at it, Naoto is such a freakin' third gender its totally fine for her to go either way, and Rise is Rise, she will do as she pleases... and that just means Kanji gets every 'normal' guys dream, but he's not really 'normal' now is he? funny he's afraid of girls and ends up with two XD

cute... in a weird fluffy sort of way...

oh Rise, you just have to get involved in everything don't you :P

till next *Salute-waves* Sayounara, Zero!

-Ikasury

Ps: keep writing, i love you stuff :3

a interesting shift! and a nice ending! really good 3

I'm sorry; like Naoto I have been robbed of coherence. Unlike Naoto, I can resort to this:

.

That is all. 3

After reading "1 More Chance", I got used to this pairing (if that's the correct term for this). This story is very well written, and the characters emotions flow through nicely. Good job.

For some reason, after Sora/Kairi/Riku KH fics, I've come to fall in love with OT3/threesome whatever stories. Go figure. This pairing is sort of new for me since I've only read a couple other Underclassmen fics involving them, but this is definitely the first with a tangible relationship. I loved it. Great writing, totally in character, and the ending made me warm and smile-y. :) Great job.

I can honestly say that before today I have never considered Kanji/Rise/Naoto to be a legitimate couple. But damn if this isn't the cutest thing I've ever read. The ending line made me very happy and I love your writing

plus, I'm pretty sure Kanji is the only guy in P4 that can take two women to bed... well except Igor. Igor's a pimp. It really was great.

: D !

Adorable. Simply adorable. It's just so damned cute and fluffy that I really don't know what else to say- except funny and poignant too.

I love how this story just comes together so naturally- these three really do make for a quite interesting dynamic. You do well with these prompts, I do say!

Looking forward to seeing more from you, as always. Thanks!

I adore this scenario! So sweet and hilarious! And I love the idea of Rise planning to enact cliche things like the old 'trapped in the lift' gambit (you should have helped, Yosuke!). These three really are just the best trio. You are so good at humanising Rise where most stick to her cliche traits without digging further. If there was ever an OT3, it's these three, lol. I swear this could be expanded into an amazing coming-of-age young adult book.

Keep up the awesome work and take care!

CA

Nice three-way. The thing that is lacking in Kanji and Naoto's 'relationship'(-ing) was their lack of confidence and awkwardness of their own ambiguous sexuality. Rise, being the cheery person, seems the only logical rock into keeping them together, while also having a piece of it too. Very interesting way you wrote on that, since threesomes can be tricky and often lead to fights and what not.

I'm not really keen on this myself, but I gave it a shot anyway. I wasn't disappointed as it was cute and cleaver. Also quite original, and funny in some of the snippits. Sort of gives an idea, really...

Anyway, great story and hope to read more of your creative works.

-Vegeta the 3rd.

Hmm, interesting. I'm not a true fan of the Rise/Kanji/Naoto pairing (or would that be tripling...?) mostly because, I will admit, the unorthodoxy of it unsettles me (as much as I wish it didn't). But at the same time, the three of them work together. And Kanji and Naoto are both so ambiguous about their sexuality that I can see them as not thinking that gender really maters in a mater of heart. The writing is good too! When Rise dumped snow down Naoto's back, I made a snorting-laugh-noise that made several people in the library turn to look at me strangely.

I like this story...and though I'm not sure about the pairing (tripling...?), I enjoy what you've done here.

Good work!

I love this fic! Totally!

I love how you describe each of their feelings. About how rise thinks about kanji and naoto, and how she likes them both. The feeling is.. just can't be described very well. It's like the feeling of liking your friends, but it's not love.

I too love how you tell the story by rise trying to 'unite' both of her friends, and how much she has done for it.

The part when she kisses kanji and does the same to naoto, it's kinda surprising (especially because naoto's a girl too), but it tells the readers how she really likes her friends.

And finally, I love the ending. The part where kanji kisses naoto and rise wraps her arms around them? It made me squeal

This fic tells us how strong their friendship is, and how they actually care for each other so much.

Thank you for the great fic!

Very well done, Kanji is a well-done character that I can relate to in so many ways, and his happy ending was well-deserved. I felt that everyone was in character, and the POV switches threw me off a little bit, but I got used to them. Alltogether, very nice.