Uh oh.

The setup is nice and snappy. I'm excited!

so Cloud is Sephiroth reincarnated to stop his past life?
... that explains just who he pissed of to have it that bad

Nooooooooo!

Hahaaha by the by, Cid's entrance was golden. Hahahaha

Oh goodness, the interrogation bit with Reno and Rude. Ha! xD

Just sayin', I adore the way you write Cid. c:

*gasp* Paine and the Vincester?

Oh wow I thought Yuna was that one guy. B-something.

Ahh the excitement! What is the ex-Silver General planning?

I was thinking for a second that Mr. Sparks's first name would be Nicholas *dun dun TISSS*

But man oh man was I flipping out that last moment with the materia fading! Aah!

Finding your author page was like striking gold.

Love it! This was written so incredibly well, and I can't even imagine how you managed to display each character's emotions so well. Great job on this!

There is no emoticon for my face right now. You've blown my mind and I LOVE IT. this whole thing is just...yeeeee! And all the references and little details and Cloud and Sephiroth and...! This is headcannon now. There's just no stopping it. :DDDDDDDDD

That was just...epic. The full circle at the end was amazing, revealing origins of holy, Shin-Ra, the Turks, and what I'm assuming was the creation of Midgar.

And the link between Cloud and Sephiroth at the very end? Genius. Truly a masterful work, that I enjoyed reading every step of the way.

*slow, Orwellian clap*

Keep us informed, M. I would love to read your next epic, even if it is on real pages (random hate; I'm actually an archivist, so the written word is fairly holy).

Happy trails, amigo. just got a little more silly.

-TM