spike and carley will be good parents

when you wrote this, did you know donald trump would become president? lmao

I have to say that the choice of 'Donald' and the line about 'It could be the President's name' was pretty prophetic.

Love the medical accuracy of this story!

Haha, when you wrote this, did you ever think donald trump would become president?

I waited through the entire story before commenting. This has to be one of the absolute best works of fiction I've read on here. The 'Heaven and Hell' chapters made me cry, and I got several laughs out of its entirety. You're a fantastic writer, and I commend the obvious effort that went into this. Thanks for this beautiful piece :)

Reading this made me more said that Ratchet died in TF:TM

aawwwwwww

Am I the only one who wants to see a sequel!?

Beautiful!

I have had my account for almost a year. This was one of the first to go on my favorites list. This is my favorite chapter because of the way Ratchet responds. He truly cares about his patients but tries to act tough. You write that well. I understand wanting to know the spicific things readers like. Enjoying your other stories too. Im glad you write in English. Google translate would get old.
EM

loved that

d'aaw

oh ratchet ratchet ratchet

lol

This was awesome! Little Daniel arrives and Ratchet is there from beginning to end! Naturally Iron Hide would be protective of Carly, and the Donobots were too sweet! Red Alerts valid concerns were perfect, and Daniel being made an Autobot at the end was the best!