I loved this I was mad when you couldn't fix that mess I like that you took it and made it work

Reading this through again from the beginning so I can remember what its about lol. Been a while I must admit.

I agree with Alistair, there is a chance that they could have children, it isn't unheard of and trying would be fun lol.

Right onward and upward... next chapter xx

A lovely story well written with a great deal of humor and angst. Fun and fast paced, I read it from beginning to end. I loved it.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards

Naomi Smith

Oh, cute. I like that she sets up the mess with Dog at the beginning of the origin.

I think I see where this is going, and I think I like it. Next chapter, please!

Keep writing. Am still enjoying this story very much. :-)

I have completely fallen in love with this fic. :) And I love Barkspawn. Most adorable mabari name ever. :)

This is a very interesting premise for a story. I just started reading it today, and I'm really liking it. One thing you might want to consider, however, is that it seems unlikely that Alistair wouldn't order an investigation. Or at least interview her. Even limited by the constraints of politics, he should have at least interviewed her with Eamon or someone. Not to mention, why on earth would he take Anora's word on anything? As soon as she contacted him, he should have started getting suspicious... or at least broached the subject with Elissa when she came to Denerim. As nice a girl as Amelia undoubtedly was, she couldn't be all that beloved by the people of Ferelden quite yet. She wasn't even queen yet. Or at least not more beloved than the woman who saved the whole dang country. I would think it would be dangerous for the nobility to arbitrarily execute the Hero of Ferelden without a trial. That's the kind of thing that leads the common people to revolt. You can see it throughout history... Elissa is their hero. Amelia was some random Bann's daughter. The nobles would probably care more about Amelia than Elissa, but the peasants would probably rally behind Elissa. Remember how disbelieving they were during the game about Loghain's betrayal? Anyway, it's just something to think about. Truthfully, if you used that, used the peasant's anger in your plot it could add a cool dimension for your story. If not, then I am sure you will take us somewhere equally interesting. I look forward to continuing and seeing where you go. Happy Writing!

Well written story; am enjoying it (now that we got past the angsty, sad stuff). I am hoping for a happy ending!

It makes perfect sense that the dog would be on Alistair's side. So now will she yield? I'm curious to see!

OMG! I love how Barkspawn played it! (Still sitting her LMAO and shaking my head!) Too much fun!

Great idea, the additional duel with the family. I look forward to it!

Yay! you updated

Interesting. I look forward to the duel!

I wondered about this line of thought:

"But after I made you King, I felt like such ...such a fool! I gave you everything for your happiness. I was desperate for anything to make you smile."

What exactly did she give for his happiness? She made him king. From the way Alistair is characterized I assume he is his unhardened self, so she basically forced kingship on him against his will. A life Alistair never wanted for himself ... and she did everything for his happiness?

Makes Elissa look like a self-centered cow, actually.