Wonderful fic! Loved this and how their relationship played out.

I really like Derek accidentally slipping out his future thoughts and Pen's reaction to that was great. I'm really glad that Derek's ok, and I love Penelope's reaction to him being hurt.

Love the phone call, and Penelope freaking out about what was going to happen. I'm glad Derek was able to reassure her that everything would be alright. And I really like how their relationship is progressing and Derek calling her his girlfriend.

So glad they finally gave in to their desires. And boy did they. :-)

Great scene at the bar. I'm glad that Elle was there so the two of them could get a bit of time alone together. And I love that even though they are fighting she still texts him every night so that Derek knows she's home safe. And I'm really glad that they are talking again, or at least emailing again.

Oh, he really screwed up this time. I love Penelope letting him have it and Elle's conversation with him. The scene at the end is just heartbreaking, I hope they can fix things soon.

Love Derek's jealousy in this, and I'm really glad Penelope told him what she thinks about it... hopefully he does something about it. I really like them going to the game together. Great scene.

You are doing a wonderful job writing their teasing. I love their self defense lesson and the phone call at the end is great.

Oooh... great start. I really like their flirting and then Pen dropping the ice cubes hint to her dream. I love both of their thoughts on their relationship and if they should take it farther.

Great story! I loved it, very sweet :)

great story!

too cute!

Haha, that was actually sweet. (: Great job!

So sweet. I absolutely loved the ending. Great job!

Love, Thalia

This was too sweet.

Love, Thalia