Perfect! I love reading your stories!

So sweet and beautiful. I want these stories to just keep going.

I enjoyed the first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.

Essa é uma das histórias mais doce que já li
Amo como você descreveu o amor de Indy e marion
A dança de valsa deles
Foi tudo muito fofo

Awsome story!

Very good story! I loved it! How do you come up with such great ideas for your stories? You are an amazing author! Excellant! Love from the Solomons, Ahu(Allana Solo)

lovely pen name you have, very original!

This is a great story, sweet and sentimental - top marks on the research with the flashback, I'm a writer so I know it's a pain. Mutt is quite likeable in your stories. The slang is a great touch.

The whole flashback showing Indy's good nature was lovely, well done

Such a sweet story! Live it!

Wow, just discovered this and look forward to reading more D

I totally loved this story! Actually, I love all your stories. I think you are an exceptionally talented writer: you are doing a fantastic job with the characterizations.

How do you come up with these great ideas for your stories?

Please, update the other stories soon?

Love from Germany,

mirabile

cant wait for the next chapter!

awww :)

:)

Absolutely adorable! I love the flashback to young Marion and Indiana. Bribing her to keep her classes! So very Indy like! Lovely end to a lovely story - I look forward to your next update/story!

That was so sweet! I wish there was more, but you are the writer and you choose when its done. Will you be updating your other stories! I love your other Indiana Jones stories! I'm going to see if you did. That was a amazing story!