Kiyone e Mihoshi são John e Yoko de TM.

It's 16 years since you wrote this story: I hope you still like it, because it's good: also sensitive and kind.
The Quaker maxim is "look for the light within":
this you have done, and so have your characters - be proud! :)

That's realy good I like it that just the way I've always of Mihoshi for years and the you made her take about Kiyone being ambitious you relly hit the nile on the head keep it up

Awe...an inspiration credit! This is just what I had in mind when I tossed the idea to you RingyP. Very well done. You stirred a bitof emotion in this one. I could see Nobuyuki walking along a the lake and thinking this, with a half-happy, half-sad smile on his face. Good work. Definately a basket full of carrots on this one!

Great job with the character of Sasami. I was wondering when you were going to do her, and I think you really did catch her personality quite well. Wonderful.

Sincerely,

Acey

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Washu is one of my favorite characters too. Your doing great!

This is a nice little introspection into the inner workings of the Tenchi crew. Its not your typical fanfic, but it still good. I like how each od them have a different veiw on the situation, and I think that you have offered us a biut of insight into the characters here. Thanks for the good read.

Wow! You really showed that there is a lot more depth to the characters that roam around the Tenchi Muyo universe than meets the eye. I like how you did that a lot. Who's the next chapter going to be about?

Sincerely,

Acey

(the girl who mostly reviews the DBZ android fics, so you are darn lucky I stopped by the Tenchi fics today)

It was a teensy bit confusing for me because you switched from the OVAs (Ryoko being Washu's daughter) to Universe (with Kiyone and all), but other than that minor detail, it was great to read! I especially loved reading Washu's thoughts. I'm a sucker for the whole mother-daughter thing. XD

~HoL

I LOVE this ! Mihoshi is, probably, my FAVORITE Tenchimuyo charcter ! And, you've pictured her howe I picture her ! Well..

almost ;) IS she smart ? Well.. she is VERY observant ! But.. as for "common sense" (an

oxymoron if their ever was one), Mihoshi-

like me- doesn't have it)!

Glad you updated. Mihoshi's were quite good. I imagine that even though she hides it, it must hurt her when the others call her an idiot and such. Poor Mihoshi. Well hope you continue soon.

For my review of chapter 1, the first sentance should read "and NOT Ayeka."

Poor Ryoko...I feel so sorry for her. I feel really sorry for both Aeka and Washuu as well. You described the characters emotions beautifully. Emotional complexes is always good to write about. Great story. Are you going to continue with some of the other characters?

Poor Ryoko, if only she realized that Tenchi WOULD choose her, and Ayeka. She hides her insecurity too well; only Washu and Tenchi have even the slightest clue about it. But given the strained at best relationship between Ryoko and Washu, Tenchi is really the only one who can help her. If only he'd let her know how he really feels... But then, I suppose he needs to figure out how he feels before he can do that. A pity that guys, and teenage guys in particular, tend to be even more clueless about their own emotions than about those of others, as I can attest from personal experience.

Another good chapter.

Though I despise Ayeka, I think I'm starting to warm up to her ways (*gasp gasp* barfs) Good going, I still look forawrd to Washu's though.