I love it!

I love this, and it’s sad you have not updated this is forever but if you want to then that would be great!

Love it please continue! Oh maybe add some time skips!

This is a great story but you could benefit from a beta... I noticed a lot of mistakes with homophones but the story is great so smiley face for you! :)

i hope u havent abandoned this story as ive just refound it again and i bloody love it

AWE! Okay I'll join the kidnap attempt. On other matters, do you need a beta? Because I love you're story and think its a great shame you haven't updated in years. If you have a beta or are rewriting please ignore the offer with my apologies.

LITTLE IANTO IS SOOOOO CUTE! UPDATE

I loved your story right from the beginning! I thought hmm this story could be interesting. But this story completely captured my attention and I for one loved it! I hope that you will continue updating, but since its been 1-2 years I doubt it. Great job!

Please write more...pleawse

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NO! Another chapter, Pretty pretty please!
Arhglflarglflem, I love this so much.
So adorable, so great.
However, there are a few grammatical errors occassionally, but nothing to really get annoyed about. Just a heads up about that.

But other than that, I love this quite a bit. Please update very soon. I know that one of the major problems with a story like this-Deaging, possibly plotless (Not that I'm trying to imply yours is plotless, I have a story where people get deaged and is basically plotless and fluff,)-is ideas. So, if you would like any ideas, um, here's one. Ianto get's to go out with Tosh for lunch one day.

Only use it if you want to, though.
Anyway, Happy writing!
(Please update soon. Please.)

SSQ

I've started reading this fic, yet couldn't continue. While the plot is interesting and well thought off the many mistakes in the language is really off-putting. I have the same problem you have. Could you please look for a beta? It's a shame that a fic like this wouldn't be read more because of the distracting language. If you don't know anyone, then there's the beta section of this site.

you've got this chapter also in chapter one.

Aww I liked Ianto spending time with Rhys. Glad to see that Ianto had a good time with him.

Yay! Thanks for the update - and no typos (i think). Hehehe never reason with angry Ianto!

Update please? please please please please? I need little Ianto happy times. Pleaase

please update soon, pretty please!