I love this story-it's written quick and short without being dry or annoying, and I love your character portrayals. I can't wait to read the rest of your stuff-I just finished a collection of Sherlock Holmes stories and glad I stumbled upon a great writer to satisfy my obession until I get my hands on more :)

Cliffie. Not nice.

Had me smiling through most of it, though. Keep writing!

YIKES! I do love this format to bits, though; wonderful job!

Ach! What happened!

That was very well written Lemon Zinger. :) I love the way you portrayed Watson's nightmares. Well done.

Fluffy and cute. Well done. :)

All 3 chapters excellent; hope you'll write more as time allows ;)

All hail the warm-fuzzies! Holmes/Watson bromance bonding is amazing. Wonderfully done.

Keep writing!

Like this very much. Only objection is I'd like to see them more fleshed out into paragraph comparisons... but that's a matter of personal taste.