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gaaraxsasuke

I COMPLETELY agree with the Guest review below me. I read this story because it was from you and usually I love them, but this story... I found myself rolling my eyes more than half the time. And the ending actually made me go "What the fuck?" at how cheesy it was. Come on. Sakura was sucking his dick when he PROMISED that it would just be talking, and he wasn't stopping it. I'm sorry but thats it. Don't matter how "well" she knows your body. That's it hombre. You're not ALLOWED to get the guy at the end. You fucked up. He shouldn't have gotten Sasuke back. All in all I just _

I don't like the way you're making Naruto out to be. He's turning out to be some vain, egotistical, insecure creature that's only looks and no talent. I know there's some story behind why he's acting the way he does, and that ought to be big and important because I really despise your depiction of Naruto right now. Furthermore, I think you're being biased about Sasuke's abilities and that in turn only manages to make the people surrounding him look like superbly inferior beings. You wrote that Kyuubi is a famous band, so even though they're mainly singing sexual songs, there's got to be a reason why they made it big, right? Compared to them, Sasuke is an amateur. He's just starting. The band has experience. Make them out to be at least like that, experienced, that is. The way the story is going, the band is looking like the newbies, and that Sasuke is the one who had spent a long time in the industry. Another thing, have you ever heard of employer-employee etiquette? Though Sasuke hates one of his employers doesn't mean you could outright demean him. Ever heard of respect? Either your Sasuke is overly arrogant or just plain disrespectful.

I did not intend this to be a flame because I'm loving the story, the characters' personalities I hate but I adore the story. Please take this as constructive criticism.

Wow. Naruto and the gang are assholes.

Awe! I love this story. Listening to the songs while reading the chapters makes it all the more emotionally. _

Love it

Youre doing a great job!

I just read the first chap and in the end of the chap I was like 'wow. damn, that was a lot of dialogues'
just saying, you could make it better if you add narations to your story

cute story. thanks for sharing!

Wow. Sad, but oh so good that I didn't want to stop reading it. Great job!

"I'm confused," he said.

"I thought you cleared up that you're gay Sasuke," he said.

"Not that kind of confused Itachi," Sasuke sighed.

i was silently cracking up at that:3 silently being the keyword. its flubbin 3:48 am. if my parents catch me, im toast ps. i so saw ssasuke eye-twitching at that w

hey! ive started to read some of your other stories cuz i like yours so muchw i havent reviewed earlier chaps cuz i got sucked into the story but now i have a question:

d:"I give them two weeks, tops," Kiba said.

"You're crazy, a week," Kiba said.:b

did kiba just argue with himself o.O

For the first page I think that is a great story but for the end. I think is not so great

I thought for the first, Sasuke want to prove it to her father that he can succes even without a support from his father.

I know that for the end he success

But I dont know, is it for the last his father say something that he feel sorry to sasuke that he always underestimate sasuke because I can't see the different relationship with her father before or after he become famous

but i still like your fiction story,

Thank you for your great fiction :) :) :)

I really enjoy this story. I will check your profile for more !