Lol too funny!

Wow man! Its a cuteeee story! :) I like it tnx for the cuteee FiC :D

wow...this is great,,ive watched several of this shows on TV and i enjoy it a lot,,but the way you put it in your story i like it much better...who wouldve known that a worst date would turn to be your dream date..lol this is way funnier id say:)

Loved this! It was absolutely brilliant~

I had tons of fun reading this, especially the part where Shizuru wanted to crack her toes! Bwahahaha also the looking at the waitress! Going to my faves list now!

Oh my gosh!

I've never seen the series on MTV, but I don't think I'll have to. I like this version, and I don't mind this being my only one.

Thank you so much for sharing. Loved it to bits 3

I know it's just a one shot, but... How about making it a two-shot, showing us how their real date goes? My imagination can only take me so far *pout* Pretty please?

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That's how I felt after reading :P (The story was cute!)

Thanks for this! (inner squealing ensues)

you should do a part 2. :D

Really great story! Thanks a bunch!

wow i like it...i think it's too much about What mai done to Natsuki but it ok as long as this story's Shiznat!

This was a very fun story to read!

loved it! :) hope you continue on from the date.

Ahahahahaha! That was fun! I have to admit that I've unintentionally made people uncomfortable by my joint-popping. I only do my knuckles, but the toe knuckles is what gets them, lol.

“You just checked out her butt in front of me!” Shizuru accused in a high-pitched voice. In truth, Natsuki was about to ask for more mayo, but the waitress was too far away.

LOL. If I were an actress in the background I'd try my best not to snicker so loud, hehe.

Sadly, there wasn't enough to make there really disastrous. Maybe I'm just greedy, but I mean you could have added a few more things because you said Shizuru's good at improvisation.

Natsuki certainly was the charmer indeed, and I had a feeling it might have been Shizuru that might ask her out to make it up to her, but ha! In the end, it really was sweet.

cute story!

I thought this story was hilarious and cute I liked it alot.