Oh god a Mary Sue! The horror! Shield your eyes, lest you be pulled into its spell and be forever enslaved to play to her whims! This is pretty good, a Mary Sue story that is actually well written, bravo! :)

sory that was a type-o it is the first spartan he has one story and its actually good. read it and review if you like naruto!

Mr. goody two shoes

hey. this is Mr. goody two shoes. i just hadt sined in yet. but what the fuck is this. oh and all of you flamers, i'm thinking about leaving critics united,so stop flaming me. this is the worst trollfic ever! actually the fgirst spartan's naruto,kyubi and bijuu was worse, he made it just to get on our nerves.

WHERE IS THE SEQUEL I AM SO IMPATIENT AAARRRRRRGH

IT MAKES MRE WANT TO TYPE HORBLYYL

AQUAMAN IS SO JEALOUS BECAUSE HIS SUPER POWERS ARE STUPID

THIS FIC IS AWESOME I'M SO GLAD YOU FINISHED IT I HOPE YOU READ THE NEXT ONE SOON PLZ KEEP WRITING WE ALL LOVE YOU AAAAAHHHHHHH SATALIKI

Oh, darn it all. Just when it was getting good.

Well, I suppose congratulations are in order. Not many people could keep trolling for this long when their only reviewers were anonymous spammers. Or, y'know, yourself. But you pushed through and persevered, and after all that hard work and dedication you have...

Oh. Well, I guess this is still a steaming pile of shit that drops your reader's IQ points like Raid drops flies. But no one can accuse you of not finishing what you started. Silver lining, amirite?

I guess this is it for now. Hope your fingers aren't too sore from writing a few dozen reviews on your own story to do the same for the next one...'cause fake self-esteem is still better than none at all! Have fun with "The Food Lion King" (which I can only hope will be placed in my favorite fandom...), and don't let dem haters getcha down! Remember, they might have good taste, higher intelligence, and a tendency to derive pleasure from your idiocy, but you have...SASTALIKI!1!11!1!

And possibly some slight brain damage too. But I digress.

And that's all I have to say about that. Good day to you.

Aquaman52

~LU~

OMG!1! YOUV FINALY FINISHD IT!1ONE!1

Now, delete this shit.

Tallz~

OMGOGMOMG

THIS IS AMAZINGG! It's the perfect ending to the perfect sotryy I wonder if she said yes? omg. that was so magical i love it alot. Please write more I cannot wait for the FOOD LION KING

Kay, Paige, whenever I read this my mind plays your voice as the narrator. It makes me lmfao SO hard [: I adore you and your epic story tellin skills. All them other haters need to step off and quit... flaming...trolls... or whatever the f* they do. Keep writing.

And kudos to whomever else writes this

If you are wondering why no one has reviewed your story in a long time, it's because we are waiting for you to update!

OK guys, this truly is freaky, the phone literally rang as soon as I read the last word of this email!

I am taking the bait - what do I have to lose right? Hope it works! Supposedly The Phone Will Ring Right After You Do This. Just read the little stories and think of a wish as you scroll all the way to the bottom. There is a message there - then make your wish. No attachment on this one.

I'm 13 years old, and I wished that my dad would come home from the army, because he'd been having problems with his heart and right leg. It was 2:53 p.m. When I made my wish. At 3:07 p.m.(14 minutes later), the doorbell rang, and there my Dad was, luggage and all!

I'm Katie and I'm 20 and I've been having trouble in my job and on the verge of quitting. I made a simple wish that my boss would get a new job. That was at 1:35and at 2:55 there was an announcement that he was promoted and was leaving for another city. Believe me...this really works!

My name is Ann and I am 45 years of age. I had always been single and had been hoping to get into a nice, loving relationship for many years. While kind of daydreaming (and right after receiving this email) I wished that a quality person would finally come into my life. That was at 9:10 AM on a Tuesday. At 9:55 AM a FedEx delivery man came into my office. He was cute, polite and could not stop smiling at me. He started coming back almost everyday (even without packages) and asked me out a week later. We married 6 months later and now have been happily married for 2 years. What a great email it was!... See More... See More... Afficher davantage... See More... Näytä lisää... See more... See More... See More... See More... See More... See more... See more... See More... See more... See More... See More... See More... See More... See More... See More... See More... See More... See More... See More

Just scroll down to the end, but while you do, think of a wish. Make your wish when you have completed scrolling. Whatever age you are, is the number of minutes it will take for your wish to come true. ex. you are 25 years old, it will take 25 minutes for your wish to come true). However, if you don't send this to people in 5 minutes, you will have bad luck for years!

Go for it!SCROLL DOWN!

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Congratulations! Your wish will now come true in your age minutes.

Now follow this carefully...it can be very rewarding!

If you send this to 10 more people, other than the 5 that you already have to send to, something major that you've been wanting will happen.

LULULU

I GOT SOME KISMET

LULULU

YOU GOT SOME TOO

LULULU

LET'S UPDATE KISMET

MAKE A NEW CHAPTER AND

LULULU

LET's PLAY KITTY KISMET

KITTY KISMET

DO YOU WANT KITTY KISMET

OR DO YOU WANT REVIEWS

ARE YOU UPDATING?

HURRY AND UPDATE

MSA, LAY OFF okay you know NOTHING baout LCO alrite. You can't complain that Lonely Cheese Opera doesn't understand you when you don't understand HER. You are juse jelouss that you are not the favorite anymore because you're never here for autumn thursday anymore. autumn thursday needs someone reliable to comment on their stories and maybe if you didn't get SUCK GRADES that would be you BUT IT'S NOT. So now it's time for a new champion, kay

Also I am LCO's bestie so I know about her okay. She is super awesome and if you mess withe her you mess with me.

Autumn thursdya, you are great and we want you to update soon please

Midnite. :C :C :C :C :C i can't believe you would outright curse like that where every1 can see it. I am 9 years old and i read ur comment iand now I am super upsedt bceause i can never see the wolrd the same again and sorry my typing is so bads but i'm rlyy upset right now