I like this. Poor Zara. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this, but I would rather you update "Strangers from Distant Lands".

Wow. This was wonderful! I love how Zara was portrayed during the loss and how she managed to pull herself together.

Owch. Reading this hurt. And a little more info on what happened to her would be nice. Maybe seeing Obi-wan in a few years...

Most of your work that I'v read is your SW one-shots, but your such an awesome writer, I just had to add you as a Fav Author! And i think that this story would be crazy-good if you continued it! Maybe Obi-Wan can somehow find Zara?

I like it. You should continue on. Obi-Wan is still alive too. :)

Very good... I haven't read a story as deep as this placed in Order 66.

aw, that's sad... :'(

Oh my gosh, this was so sad! Amazingly written once again and your take on the emotions was perfect!

A truly gorgeous story! :)

Depressing. (As if I should talk about that!)

But it would be interesting to read more stories like this.

No, I think this is good as it is. I enjoyed looking through her eyes. It's not often that you see things through other, original or not major, characters. This certainly was interesting! And, really, is it just me, or did you cry when the clones turned?