Reviews for Right Moves
KiyanAoi chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Please update your stories... Q.Q
I absolutely love them!
Clarrisa Constatine chapter 3 . 7/13/2012
Please miss('), can I have some more?
chisora chapter 3 . 2/16/2012
Hmm...I feel like I have to assume that his is a very dead fic. Which is too bad because I really enjoy it lol. Anyways, thanks for the work you put into it, it was really fun to read!
lululuke015 chapter 3 . 8/25/2011
please update! i really like this story!
It's.Funnier.In.Enochian chapter 3 . 8/13/2011
I completely and utterly LOVE this! Brilliant writing and fantastic job! More, please? ;)
J. Marley chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
I'm quite interested in how this will turn out. Please update?
Kitty Bane chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
wow Jace is such an ass...poor Alec...being used by Jace...but this is really good! hope you update soon! Love Kitty .
YurieOfTheLair chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
Yaah finally a little Magnus :D I'm looking forward to see what'll happen next
Bookworm24601 chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
Please Keep writing...this is REALLY Fantastic! X)

I'm not sure if I like the whole 'Jace knows and is sleeping with Alec' thing though...
NoahBody chapter 3 . 8/29/2010
Awesome, keep it coming! I love your work!
BornNephilium chapter 3 . 8/27/2010
AHH MOTHERFUCKER UPDATE! THIS STORY IS THE SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!

like i lovee the way you guys made magnus... and i love the way you made the whole.. hurt alec... and jace.

i think that alec should get really heartbroken beacuse of jace.. and you should go into detaail w/ that... but yeh ;p its amazing
Endgame Scribe chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
I love the story already! It's great how you can bend the story to your will and still have everyone be totally in character. I wish I could, lol! Please update soon! I'll give you a cookie! *waves cookie*
MorbidMandy chapter 3 . 7/25/2010
Great chapter! :D can't wait for more. Good premise. Update soon.

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new name new me for pixie chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
Lovely. I loved Magnus's entrance, especially since you didn't only include Clary's perspective.

Be careful you don't start making Jace or Clary look bad in order to advance the plot though. I've seen a lot of fanfics go wrong because of character bashing.

Please update quickly!
tomboy-girl21 chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
I am a very lazy reviewer, but my conscience finally buggered me into giving both of you the comments you very much deserve.

Jace has reached the pinnacle of douchedom, but I don't think he's evil. Alec has always given Jace what Jace wants, and this I'm sure, to the blonde wonder, is just another thing. I think if Jace (with all his intimacy issues) was aware of the repercussions of their actions, he'd be a bit more hesitant.

Alec isn't made for what he's been doing. He's shy, introverted and he attaches a lot of meaning to things like his virginity. Alec has nothing to compare to Jace, so he feels guilty for wanting satisfaction. I hope Jace isn't going to be the experience Alec draws from, but who knows.

Jace and Alec are best friends. And when you sleep with your best friend, it hardly ends well. The relationship changes.

Aside from my pointless yammering, I think both of you have done a fantastic job with the characters. I know a lot of reviewers have said so before me, but they are very realistic in their portrayal.

The situation between Jace and Alec is completely plausible. It's intimate, what they're doing, and Jace knows it, so he tries to make it impersonal. So far, I'm fascinated with how the story is going, and I like the song you used in the intro. Very well suited.

I'm excited that Magnus was introduced into the story, and even though I know Alec is going to be very torn (loyalty to Jace and attraction to Magnus) I still look forward to it. Because I'm hoping, when all the drama ends, it will have been good for everyone (especially Alec's self esteem).

It's a wonderful creation and the wait just made it worth it. Well, after that long review, I'm off. I need to do a lot more reviewing.
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