Awww I hope that one day you will update this story again! XD Two thumbs waaayyy up!

Slytherin and Hufflepuff.

Oo... I want to see what happens when someone tries to pick on Luna...

Did you die again? Lol

Oh my gosh is this story wonderful! This is one of the few crossovers in this fandom that uses Toby as one of the main characters. That fact alone makes this story one of my favorites. Well, that and it doesn't make me cringe when reading. It has quite the opposite effect on me.

I'm curious to know what Toby thinks of his and Sarah's ability to enter the Labyrinth. Mainly, I want to know how Sarah explained it all to him. I especially wonder when he'll meet Jareth, maybe when Jareth and Sarah finally get together?

In any case, this is a great story! I really wish you'll continue. Maybe you have lost inspiration given how long it's been, so I'd be perfectly happy with a summary of events.

I think you've died for real now. Two years dead. I'd give you a Phoenix Down if I could! (If you don't know what that is, I'm sorry for your loss.)
What is up with Harry staring at Sarah? What is he thinking about the strange Muggle in their midst? I'm certainly loving her in the Magical World of Harry Potter! I actually wish there were more of them and more diverse! I definitely love the American she's kept about herself. It makes her seem more realistic cuz even if someone moves from their homeland to a new culture, they're always going to keep some characteristics about themselves, some culture THING from their homeland, intentionally or not. I especially love the reaming she gave to Dumbledore and Snape! So awesome!
Did Sarah leave the dueling room before Toby dueled with Hermione? I don't think she would have allowed that match if she was still in the room. I need to re-read, I may have missed it.
I like and dislike the progression of Jareth and Sarah's relationship. It feels so gradual, that I'm craving more after every tidbit you give!
Please come back! And Bring back this wonderful world with you!

This is so good and I absolutely love what's there. This is def gonna find its way onto my rec list. I like your characterization of Toby the most and I'm kinda glad he ended up in slytherin as it made things more interesting.

Am rereading this absolutely wonderful story for the third or fourth time, since you are so cruel as to deprive us by not updating for almost two whole years... Moar pleeeeeez?

Since your making a comeback in fanfic writing, maybe you could right a chapter for this story, hmm?
I really did enjoy this story with Toby.

Ooooh hope you choose to continue this! I love it

I suppose it's safe to assume this story is discontinued? Admittedly that does make this reader sad, but in any event it was very enjoyable and interesting to read. So thanks much for sharing it, even if it does go unfinished:)

I would love to see this updated! It's awesome :)

LOLZ! I LOVE Fred and George and their hilarious pranks! And adding Toby to that is going to be a whole lot more interesting. :D

I do wish you'd finish this story. I really hate getting invested in great stories more than the author apparently is...

I love this story. There are not many great crossovers for Labyrinth and Harry Potter. This is fantastic. Please update soon!