Such a cute story. I couldn't stop reading even if I had wanted to, I was too anxious to see what would happen next, especially after everything in the back room at Slausen's and then the entire Epilogue, waiting to see if Arnold would finally realize his true feelings and admit them to Helga. Wish it didn't have to end after that April Fools night in the den, but I guess not every story can be a 1 million word mega-epic story, lol. And what better way to end it than Arnold and Helga cuddled together. Clearly their talk, and other activities, lol, went exactly how Helga was hoping it would.

AxH forever!

"I care about you Helga...in a way." Nice Arnold lol

I couldn't finish this story. It was really boring and the scenes were drawn out to much. Way to much.

Great chapter.
I loved Helga and Phoebe's phone conversation towards the end, and Helga asking Phoebe about her and Gerald.
And of course I LOVED the Arnold and Helga moments.

Ooh, a cliffhanger with Arnold running off like that.
I think it's pretty obvious where he's going though.
And I loved the Gerald and Phoebe moments toward the end there, and Jamie-O teasing Gerald about him and Phoebe.

Really great chapter.

Amazing chapter.
If Arnold's grandpa hadn't shown up, Arnold and Helga probably would have kissed again.
And I always liked that half lidded gaze that Arnold would get, and he was giving her that half lidded gaze quite a bit in this chapter.

Amazing chapter! Love it.

Wow simplemente Wow! Que maravilla de historia la que hiciste te juro que me ha encantado las dosis exactas que le pusiste a toda de esta tensión romántica de veras amé s me tu visión de la relación sarcástica./romántica de Arnold y Helga

Very cute! Love how you tried to make sense of the timeline as well lol

Oh, I luv you. How I luv you, you amazing writer you. You Adonis/Aphrodite of the literary arts. -sigh- heheee. That was perfect. 3

You write really well. But I think you drag your Stories for so long, it gets kind of repetitive and really out of Character. Why is Helga so mushy now with Arnold after she just took back the Confession and most importantly why is Arnold acting like he's in love or something when he was so freaked out when she confessed, you could totally tell he was terrified, meaning he would probably not push the subject like you write here. I think he will eventually realize he likes hes back but just not a few days after, considering they kind of act like nothing had happened afterwards. That Dance looked kind of flirty but I don't think it messures up to holding Hands right and all the Kissing that is supposed to take place before that episode. Other than that you are a great writer.

WHOA, OKAY, THIS ENDED UP BEING CUTER THAN I EXPECTED. You nailed everyone's character and speaking style perfectly, and I absolutely adored the epilogue chapter. This is canon in my heart from now on.

(I know this story is old, but) THIS CHAPTER WAS SO CUTE. So, I've been in an Arnold/Helga mood lately, but this morning I got a craving for some Gerald/Phoebe fluff. I was NOT expecting it to be in the story that I was actually in the process of reading, but dang, you surely delivered! I'm loving the plot of this and can't wait to finish reading the next 2 chapters.

I wish there was more of this story, thank you for sharing it with us!