Really great characterization and dialogue. The dialogue was especially great and not OOC as some fanfics can be. The plot in general was good too. There was romance, drama and good exploration of marriage and how it's not a bed of roses the whole time. Overall great fic

This was a wonderful read!

Awwww I liked it even though it was a little angsty for my normal taste. I normally prefer the light fluffy stories hahahaha. Well written :)

I think this story was perfect just the way it was. I really really enjoyed it, a lot!

I really liked this, it was a very realistic fight, not overdone at all, about a serious issue that holds weight for both of them, and is definitely something the two of them will have to work out when they rule together. Nicely done!

Another great stsory. You could really feel the tension between them. I loved how they made up and were able to say sorry. And that Arthur said sorry first.

i like this coz it shows the fact that arthur does stuff up on occasion

good story

What a great way to take them from the fairtale of flowers and sunshine. To see that they have normal problems every couple face. Great job and great make-up.

:)

Rolletti

wonderful story! so full of emotion and angst and fluffiness - great combination there. And very believable too; I liked a lot the reasons you gave for them fighting (it seems as if that could be/become a real issue for the two of them). Thanks for writing that

love it xx

Sweet.