It is written well. Thanks for writing the story.

I still got confused about Blair's triggers this time and on New Year's Eve last year. Was is all Jack?

Loving these type of stories.

that suicide stuff was pretty drastic! pretty good though

The fact that Chuck is so... practical when he looks at how Blair's death would affect the others is scary, and the fact that he's right on the money is even scarier. I feel bad for Ewan, he may be excessively horny and brazen, but the boy's brave if he's willing to stand up to an angry Chuck Bass to defend a lady. And I wasn't confused at all. :)

i really liked this story and the A/N at the end was unneccesarry in in my eyes because i like stories where you have to think a little for yourself. you managed to tell everything without telling it right away :)

loved it!

that line:

"the three of us should have known better than to invest all we had into a girl that was so broken herself."

is gorgeous, it's written so well :D

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Chuck and Blair are in character, so kudos for that. It's not always easy.

Blair calling Ewen like a dog was very amusing; a smile worked its way onto my lips.

In fact I felt the exact opposite emotions only a few minutes later, your writing was so beautiful and I really felt for Blair. So much so, that tears came to the brim of my eyes.

The way Chuck speaks of their death is very well done, very ... I'm not sure whether creative is the word, but I never would have thought of something like that. So well done in that respect.

I really enjoyed the odd spots of humour, brought some light to mostly dark - but not too dark I assure you. Plus dark is kind of my thing.

I didn't notice any mistakes - which is something I usually do. Perhaps I was just so consumed in the story, or you really did read over it and removed any typos, misspelt words, ect.

Either way, well done.

I know I've said well done a lot, but I really mean it.

This is going to my favourites - a rare occurrence, might I add?

Your writing style is just wonderful, also. I thought I should mention that.

Thanks for creating such a beautiful story. It made my day.

CGIL xx

first of all, i'll say sorry to you because this is not a signed review. i'm just too tired to login. and secondly, i'd like to thank you so much. a while ago, i was looking at wikipedia and some other blogs for the sickness or illness that blair has but there was no sign of anything connected to it. but the answer to my question was right here. so yeah, thanks.

and i know my review was pointless so sorry again. and nice one shot btw.

i ho estly, although how creepy it might seem, i love the part what would happen to s and c if b dies. bdw. what happened with carter after her relapse? great story

Amazing! Heartbreaking beautiful and perfect!

I loved it!

Wow, this was really great! If and when Chair do break up on the show, I would hope that it would go something like this (even though I don't think it will, a girl can dream, right?). Chuck leaving becuase he can't handle losing her, and then coming back to save her. And of course Jealous!Chuck storming into her bedroom at 4am is always entertaining! :-)

I'm also glad you didn't have her sleep with that Ewan guy, which is totally a mistake that could ruin a ship, a mistake that I'm sure the GG writers would just love to make (and probably will make by the end of this season).

Anyway, I loved the whole idea that none of the NJBC could survive without Blair holding them together. And of course Chuck would be right behind her... and they would all go to hell for being so evil, lol, you made it sound so cute and sweet!

Great job!

really interesting! loved it :)

Good fanfic.

Wow. LOVE IT! You totally channeled Chuck in the lines where he's kicking the bartender out of the apartment. I could just see it playing out. And I loved the darker theme...it wasn't too dark but I could definitely feel the desperation and "broken-ness" from the two characters. More please!

chuck is such a pussy in this-he wouldnt be like that in real life. if she needed him and he loved her he'd help her through it and not bloody break up with her.