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SamWinchesterfangirl chapter 1 . 11/2/2012 Gabe? Lmao, geeez that's funny. I need to get a cat or maybe dog and name him Gabe :) |
LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 10/21/2010 I love this, he still won't let his guard down completely but he allows himself to be taken care of probably more than he does otherwise. Because she's a woman. Because she's familiar. That's my take on it anyway, and it actually is something I have been playing with in my head for awhile, too. I love the way she soothes him, the hand in his shirt, rubbing his side, the gentle kiss on the forehead. Beautiful piece, definitely in my faves. LD |
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 5/1/2010 Oh that's lovely. I like their easy familiarity, oh and shoulder wounds are my absolute fav injury! Very sweet little moment. DeansBabyBird x |
sidjack chapter 1 . 3/28/2010 Yes, Dear God, please let her make him a key, then give me a chair to sit by the window so I can watch when he visits, cause I love this. Enkidu, please have many more birthdays during the year. You can have mine. sid |
deangirl1 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010 Oh, oh, oh! This one tastes like MOARE! much, much moare! I want to know who this is and how she knows our boy! |
Orange Autumn chapter 1 . 2/4/2010 Adorable! :D This was just great. I loved the bond between them even as short as it was! Good job. |
Soncnica chapter 1 . 2/1/2010 *giggles* aw so adorable! I love Dean's attitude. Mr. Cool While Hurt! :) and btw have I told you lately that I love your sense of humor! yup I do! :) hugs, S |
TheKritty chapter 1 . 1/28/2010 Oh man I really enjoyed reading this!Should I know who she is? Because...Ofcourse, I thought of Cassie,of Liza but they didn't fit so...I love that it's real mysterious and there is no name to the woman who cares so well for Dean in this little story... "She tucks a quilt around his feet, smoothes back his hair and grazes his forehead with her lips. No fever." - Yeah. SURE. Just to check for a fever,right? *ROFL* Hilarious and so so true. I would check for a fever exactly the same way *grins sheepishly* Jesus. Loved that! Kritty |
Onyx Moonbeam chapter 1 . 1/28/2010 I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS! There is not text big enough for you to understand the shear amount of GLE I am feeling. She's gonna make him a key. And her cat loves him. And there's so much Back Story worked in, that it's amazing. "The lady wants a striptease." I love cocky Dean. And caring Enkidu. And that he's comfortable enough to sleep next to her. And tell her everything about Sam, and Bobby, and himself. Ah. Happiness. |
sergeantmicky chapter 1 . 1/28/2010 This made me feel so delightfully warm and fuzzy inside. Isn't this what all us girls love to imagine ourselves doing? I love that it wasn't *really* sexual, it was more about trust and comfort. Very nice job. :) |
nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 1/28/2010 I'd make him a key to my house if I wasn't living with my parents... Read this yesterday, LOVED it, but didn't have time to review... then reread it this morning and fell in love with your Dean all over again. I love Dean breaking into the anonymous girl's house (I'm assuming the girl's Enkidu07...) and just waiting for her... and then trying to play down his injured shoulder (is it his left one .~ ... he always seems to injure that one...) but the girl's having none of it. And I LOVE the striptease comment and the Rabies conversation. That made me totally laugh out loud... Then comes the part with Dean in a towel with the lovely bloody description of his injury and the poor guy's exhausted and LOVE the chapped/cracked lips. *I wanna kiss them now...* And the twitches as she cleans his shoulder and the admission to nightmares... LOVES LOVES LOVES! And THIS, my friend, is levels of ADORABLENESS: "A hot shower and a couple of pills and Dean's loose and limber on the sofa. He's snuggled up in her red hoodie, looking at those papers again. His eyes keep sliding shut." Can Dean break into my house, pretty please? The ending with Dean being mildly freaked out by the cat because he just hunted evil undead pets is awesome... as is falling asleep... Yeah. He can have a copy of my house key... |
Nana56 chapter 1 . 1/28/2010 M. Such a nice little fantasy! *sighs happily* He can break into my house any time. But I think a key would probably be a pretty good idea. :D Very nicely done! :) |
InSecret chapter 1 . 1/27/2010 I AM SO AMUSED RIGHT NOW. NO, I'M... OKAY. THERE IS AMUSEMENT. SEE IT? RIGHT THERE. I AM BEYOND IT. AMUSEMENT IS A DOT TO ME. |
writergirl94 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010 this is really good. like really really good. i like the little stephen king thing. |
PADavis chapter 1 . 1/27/2010 That was enough to make me lose sleep. Snaking a hand in his shirt, and the bloody shoulder, and lips on his forehead. Gah. I just might flail. Happy Birthday, Enkidu! Phoebe |