| Reviews for Heat |
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xXDoubtfulAdmirationXx chapter 1 . 8/26/2012 It's a shame there's not a lot of IsaXLea FF. I would write one but... I haven't played the game lol I've just watched all the cut scenes. But I basically understand the game. But I really loved this FF :D I could totally see this happening. |
nickie083100 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 i prefer waffles! :3 this was really good. ive seen romance fics, but they dont have a kiss in them. this is the second one besides the one that im writing right now that has a kiss |
Dom0916107 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010 Waffles! That was cute XD |
Amaya Dimayuga chapter 1 . 5/18/2010 Oh wow, adding in Reno to the mix? Haha how clever! xD. And the Twilight part was hilarious! |
Nyuffun chapter 1 . 4/17/2010 Oh my.. 33 how cute! - *giggle* xD have to read again! 3 (: Isa and Lea are cute together3 o3o |
Shadow of Intent chapter 1 . 4/10/2010 wow, grown boys watching twilight... D: |
Hell's Angel 606 chapter 1 . 3/8/2010 That was cute. |
Chasingyesterday chapter 1 . 2/12/2010 LOL! SO CUTE! loved the Twilight thing! |
auburn-flare chapter 1 . 1/26/2010 This is cute. The sad thing is that I can clearly imagine Isa reacting to the choice of the movie. :P Oh, but this is a really sweet story. I just have to say that you're missing a few full stops like, He looked over at the taller teen next to him and let out a sigh "Hey Isa?" Lea dragged his eyes away from the movie to look at the bluenette beside him, a smirk set in place And in my personal opinion, I think you should extend your sentences a bit more. Like, 'He just had to think of a creative way to express said feelings. Lea never did anything normal.' You could've added a small tiny sentence inbetween to give it a tad bit more suspense. But that is just my humble opinion. You wrote this at 12:30 in the morning so...yeah. :P Either way I loved it, keep it up! |
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 1/26/2010 CUTE~! |