Reviews for Heat
xXDoubtfulAdmirationXx chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
It's a shame there's not a lot of IsaXLea FF. I would write one but... I haven't played the game lol I've just watched all the cut scenes. But I basically understand the game. But I really loved this FF :D I could totally see this happening.
nickie083100 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
i prefer waffles! :3 this was really good. ive seen romance fics, but they dont have a kiss in them. this is the second one besides the one that im writing right now that has a kiss
Dom0916107 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Waffles! That was cute XD
Amaya Dimayuga chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Oh wow, adding in Reno to the mix? Haha how clever! xD.

And the Twilight part was hilarious!
Nyuffun chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Oh my.. 33 how cute! - *giggle* xD have to read again! 3 (: Isa and Lea are cute together3 o3o
Shadow of Intent chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
wow, grown boys watching twilight... D:
Hell's Angel 606 chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
That was cute.
Chasingyesterday chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
LOL! SO CUTE! loved the Twilight thing!
auburn-flare chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This is cute. The sad thing is that I can clearly imagine Isa reacting to the choice of the movie. :P

Oh, but this is a really sweet story. I just have to say that you're missing a few full stops like,

He looked over at the taller teen next to him and let out a sigh

"Hey Isa?" Lea dragged his eyes away from the movie to look at the bluenette beside him, a smirk set in place

And in my personal opinion, I think you should extend your sentences a bit more. Like,

'He just had to think of a creative way to express said feelings. Lea never did anything normal.'

You could've added a small tiny sentence inbetween to give it a tad bit more suspense.

But that is just my humble opinion. You wrote this at 12:30 in the morning so...yeah. :P Either way I loved it, keep it up!
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
CUTE~!