I've had this bookmarked for over two years now and have been checking weekly since the previous chapter was published last year. I really hope the story hasn't been dropped yet. No fanfics have been this captivating and entertaining. QAQ
I am super looking forward to how everything is going to play out with A'isha in such a tough spot!

Hey! Yeah this is sooooo belated and wow definitely expected to see the worse in Marik this chapter. Oh gosh if I was in A’isha’s shoes, I would most definitely defend and sacrifice myself. I’m just fangirling with Marik and my Bryn being his obedient lackey in this creepy ass trial. Poor Collins... a lot of people would be traumatized but aren’t willing to help express it because of fear. Please update soon. XX

Poor A'isha, yeah this chapter is pretty intense as Marik is not having his day fixed. Hope nothing happens to A'isha because she was just warming up to something with Marik. I think I'd feel safe with Mirah because she knows how to outsmart Marik. XD

Odion is such a gentle giant, Amara and A'isha are always learning about each other. So sad to see them hurt and Odion's word of wisdom about Marik is an eye-opener to A'isha.

Anyhoos, next chapter! XD

Ah I'm a little late and I lost my other account so that's a big oof

Anywhooo
I loved this very much! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I loved this chapter, keep up the amazing work!

WOW...Marik went there! He REALLY went there!
There's so much to say about this. I didn't think that Marik would go so far in the sadistic a-hole department (especially when he called them into his throne room). He really took our beloved girls almost to the point of no return and killed poor Collins! I didn't think that he'd actually burn the evidence either! I felt sorry for them and I'm impressed by how honorable Ish is for taking the hit for Amara's (in Marik's words) transgressions because people would normally let her take the hit after so long! And I'm glad that Amara isn't the same nasty brat that she was in the beginning, too! I'm looking forward to the next update, especially since Marik put Ish between a rock and a hard place again.
Great job twins!

OMG. As soon as I knew they were being taken to the throne room with Marik's man harem of Rare Hunters, I knew this was gonna get ugly. Marik, you bastard! Going into full RH regalia here by using everything he could in their heads as a weapon. Although it DID help that he at least found out that Aisha was not planning an escape in advance. I knew it would not end well for poor Collins, though. RIP, and straight to the incinerator. Xd Marik was fabulously in character here. I loled when Aisha said F you to him and he replied, "You'd like that, wouldn't you?" I actually made almost the exact same exchange in a story of mine. Xd I wonder how things will proceed from here? Surely, only up after it got the lowest? Or maybe I am just being naive? lol Really great job and hope for the next update sooner!

Thank you guys for finally updating!
I’m sure you guys were well aware of my eagerness.

And yeah, there might be some busted ovaries over here. But hey, it’s worth it! P

Anyway! I LOVED this chapter. Ugh, the cunningness of Marik is simply sooooo overwhelmingfans selfSorry!

I felt so bad Amara. She is clearly full of regret for causing Aisha so much distress. Seeing her vulnerability shows that she is not such a little badie that she tries to me, she has her flaws.

I have to give props to Aisha for wanting to protect her cousin. After all the shit she’s been put through because of Amara’s choices, she still shows care for her.

And Marik needs to put those teenage hormones in check! I mean, while it is REALLY HOT, he’s being a huge dick (puuuuunnnnnnnnnnn totally intended).

Anyway, great job you guys! I can’t wait to read more 3 33

OMG! That chapter is a 10000% the best and definately worth the wait! You did such a great job! There are no words to describe how exciting it was to read and after chapter 29 I expected a lot and you topped it 6 times! I didn‘t expect THAT to happen!
First of all you gave Marik another facette of ‚fucked up‘ and that‘s perfectly on point! No, he‘s not too perverted, he‘s not too crazy. To be honest I could really imagine him saying those nasty, a bit perverted stuff into A‘Ishas ear. It fits well!
And during all that shitfest and mess the girls have to endure you still find the perfect spots for ‚a little bit of humour‘-Amara statements that made me laugh so hard. It was great how he messed with her mind, he really has her at the edge of what she‘s able to bear and take. I‘m curious about how it will continue now that he knows that there actually are feelings for him in her ‚mind‘. I‘m sure that this kiss he requests from her in front of his ‚men harem‘ is not only to make her prove it; he does it on purpose and yet he‘s not willing to admit it to himself why he requests exactly that. I think it‘s not only because he wants to mess her up or fix is broken pride.
Oh man, what a chapter. You guys are amazing! Great work!

Yay, about time malicious Marik showed up..(I'm used to that side of him until he becomes remorseful)

Hi, I've been reading fanficition in the YuGiOh fandom for years, and I just wanted you guys to know that your fanfic is one of the most memorable, insightful and unique I've read so far. It's always a pleasure to read something so well-written and inspired in my favorite fandom. Today, I stumbled upon a TV series that reminded me of your work. When I first started writing, I would stalk the bookstore, searching for material that approached the vision in my head, so I thought you might enjoy this show. It's called "Good Behavior," and it features an interesting dynamic between the protagonist and a very sexy hitman who coerces her into working with him. Anyway, happy writing and keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to your next installment.

loved the chapterhow you write mariks pov and odion!
i was nearly glued to the fic for at least 4 days. please update soon!

One wordSir Jerk-A-Lot“
I‘m dying and lost my breath at this point! hahaha
Great work! Love it!

God I’m super late...I’m sorry D:
I have a lot to catch up on

But damn Amara broke my heart...everything is starting to get to her much more now
Tried to be the hero and it went to shit so quickly :(
At least this brought them closer..(that’s such a weird sentence to say considering the circumstances)

Marik’s tantrum cracked me up tho
With the way he’s written I tend to forget he’s still a teen and teens do have tantrums XD

I’m still in suspense for what’s to come though

Very interesting/amazing chapter again. I really wonder what the punishment will be and or Marik will let them go. And also who will beat Marik up for that part with ish.