This story is really good so far.

Hi. I know you're not still writing this now, but i wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying it. It's hard to wrap my head Sammy being 4 but having all the skills of his 24yo self! Kind of surreal seeing he and John having the same kind of fights they always have. You'd think John would be more aware of his mistakes since Sam didn't go back to being a child when John was there to take over!

It's heartbreaking how desperate Dean is to please his dad and how oblivious his dad is to his needs, except, as you show in this chapter, when Dean shows exceptional skill. I thought the metaphor you used was actually chilling, John looking at Dean like the way a kid looks at a new toy, just waiting to rip the plastic off. In this chapter, I loved the manager's incredulity that John would bring his children. John refuses to really look at what his choices are doing to his boys. (You described that in an earlier chapter when you wrote how John, when he does look at himself, sees himself as a kind person who cares about others; after all, he is SAVING people!) The words "blood rage" are so appropriate!

There are a few stories out there that I return to over and over when I get disgusted with the quality of the new stuff. The wish series is one of them. Thanks for providing something with genuine re-readability.

thank you for a very good story ! I'm looking forward to reading your other stories.

I enjoyed this story very much! Thank you for sharing. :)

Dr. Amara and the hospital staff seem like decent folks. Good job showing John's pastiche of concern and affection and obsession and anger.

It's both satisfying and not, to have John crash the brothers' party. Now John believes his boys and hopefully gets a parental wake up, but it could just reinforce his idea that Dean and Sam don't need to be treated like the children they are. Nevermind the burgeoning jealousy and tension Dean is likely to wake up to...

I am digging this story. I like how simple the Big Sam/Little Sam mindset is; both versions of him accept the mystery and there's no overwrought explanation of how the age manipulation works.

I am glad the story is continuing beyond the first arc! Thanks for sharing. :)

Interesting!

Um...wow. Speechless. That was perfect. Thank you.

Awesome story! I loved every minute of it!

Wonderfully awesome story! :D

Really enjoyed this story. Took me back to early seasons, the ache Sam and Dean have always ignited in my heart for the way they care for each other. I sort of hate that it's John who is the enemy in this story, but it makes sense the way you write it. (For the record, my view of John is more of a good man who made a lot of awful mistakes, most of them in regard to Dean, but who mostly redeemed himself in the end.) But the bond of Sammy and Dean is totally worth everything else that happens. Dean absolutely deserved (and continues to deserve) having someone always completely and totally in his corner, and Sam is the absolutely best person to do that for him.

Not sure if you're still active on here, but I just finished reading your story, and it was so awesome! That was such an original take on the whole de aging thing. I loved it, well done!