Omigod, so beautiful and so so sooo sad...I'm crying now. Just beautiful.

Beautifully bittersweet, warm yet heartbreaking and sad. You've captured the emotions really well, your characterisation excellent. Really really good writing.

congradulations. This was exceptionally well written.

Beautifully written.

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Great job! I loved it and this story is going on my favoirtes list!

this is beautiful and sad.

beautiful story.

Really sad, but good as well. I could actually picture the entire story as it happened. Nice job.

that was beautiful and oh, so sad! I'm crying right now as I right this. My heart breaks for young Ziva, and even a bit for young Ari. And then I laugh at myself because it's just a story about fictional characters in the first place, yet I'm bawling. Awesome writing, I'm telling you, that was so moving. Loved it.

I feel in love with this story. So sad that Ziva's mother died.